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stop hatin on whitey!

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MaD_DoGG:
hey yo i spit this simplistic bull shit/
yall keep fucking with me you will feel the full impact of this full clip/
you all seem to trip when i say im a white boy whos a crip/ just to start shit like a little bitch snitch/
be a real G like me and get rich/
i come one here just to spit a little game but it seems to me like yall bitches lame/
when i spit this shit yall bitches get slain/
blood sqirts every were like rain i love to see your life drain/
just to see your bitch ass feel the pain/
now what do yall bitches think of this white boy taking over the game/

yeah yeah fuck all you haters who talked shit about my last posted ryme! Die slow fucks!

Sikotic™:
Well that's an improvement, but anything is a improvement from that shit you were spittin last time.

Just stick around and you'll improve.

'Illicit':

--- Quote ---but anything is a improvement from that shit you were spittin last time.
--- End quote ---

LOL

but yeh, Sikotic was right,   keep spittin homie.

peace, one love

NoT:
Yeah, this is a huge improvement over the previous ish you posted. Basically, your lyricism (multis, metas, etc.) could be improved but your main focus should be on expanding your horizons and your vocab. I mean, don't always rhyme about how you're a white guy who can rhyme.

doggmastah:
;D Pay attention and read all those comments of the emcees above me, they know what they're sayin'. I agree with them. I'm tryin' to improve myself, u should do the same... by battlin' as much as u can, defy them and battle them to learn some more skills! No beef dawg!
Peace!

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