Author Topic: TELL ME WHAT THE FUCK I NEED TO IMPROVE ON (Read 600 times)

PELON · « **on:** February 17, 2002, 03:49:04 PM »

A WHATS UP MOTHA FUCKAZ THIS IS MR. PELONSTER ALL YOU 5 STAR O.G.'S AND SHIT LET ME KNOW WHAT DO I NEED TO IMPROVE ON CAUSE I'M NOT WINNING ON ANY OF MY BATTLES AND SHIT .WHAT IS IT I NEED TO ADD OR IMPROVE ON WHATS THE METAPHORS AND SHIT I DONT KNOW ABOUT THAT SHIT TELL ME WHATS UP
LATER DOGGS

DeaDSouLjaH · « **Reply #1 on:** February 17, 2002, 07:01:00 PM »

i suggest u sign up for da rookie tourney ..
u can battle ppl of your same caliber..

PELON · « **Reply #2 on:** February 18, 2002, 03:02:05 PM »

help me out dont talk shit i cant learn by battleing with rookie mothafuckaz

M Dogg™ · « **Reply #3 on:** February 18, 2002, 09:19:40 PM »

I don't know... over time styles evolve... so just let it come... I used to listen to a lot of Eazy E and Rakim before I wrote... and that's when I used to just fuck shit up. Now I try to expanded, and I've allowed myself to develope my own style. Just let it come natural.