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Illicit vs Maxi VOTE

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maxi-padz:
I Attack-The-Battle and Snap-Ya-Bladder, u think its 'NO BEEF' u 'MIS-STEAKEN' u simply Lack-Cattle/
I'm Strapped-To-Grapple, this bitch stay 'LOCKED DOWN' like 'LIGAMENT' joints wit 'SHACKLES'/
U have 'NO STRETCH', at this battles end, u 'CUM SHORT' like old men 'HAVING-SEX'/
Scabs-Off-Flesh, u definitly 'CUTT THROAT', count how many times i 'STAB-NECKS'/
Flows 'MOUTHWASH' bitch!, i stick 'ZEST' down ur throat so u can 'GARGLE' 'SOAP-OPERAS'/
Vote-Hot-For-Us, i guess u can 'REST IN PIECE', when i Throw ur 'CARCUSS' into a 'HELECOPTERS'/
Ripped wit 'CHOPPERS', try to spit 'HOTTER', i 'BURST IN FLAMES' when i fill ur body wit 'MOLTEN LAVA'/
Boltin robbers, broken Jaws-Up, like Armadilloes im gonna scare ya 'NUTS' so u can 'BALL UP'/
Like loose 'PUSSIES' ya 'THROUGH', ur punchlines 'FLAT' like 'BOSNIAN' women booty dancing to 'LUKE'/
Wire tha troops, Illicit u so 'STUPID' u thought punching 'CRACK' was 'DRUG-ABUSE'/
Slug-Ya-Tooth, I'll smash ur 'DICK' into a 'PUSH-PEN' so u can produce 'MEGA INK'/
'BLADE YA FEET' cause i 'PLAYED YA WEAK' , beat u up with my 'THIGHS' so u can 'TAKE DE-FEET'(defeat)/
Get ya wig split, im gonna chop ur 'HANDS' off so u can miss ya whole 'HIT LIST'/
A Sick-Sentence to Spit-Lessons grab and Grip-Intestines, snatch ur 'LEGS OFF' now u cant 'KNEEL' for 'FORGIVENESS'/ [/color]






TimeLock:
good shit from the both of yah maxi's beat out CeeRide with the multis although cee had some tight ones too and he also had some nice metas but i liked maxi's metas more....

My Vote= Maxi

bLaDe:
this wuz a close, hard to vote on battle since both of you have diffrent styles, which should both be respected.

Illicit same nice throuout the verse, he had witty lines and shit , but at times it didnt flow to well...


--- Quote ---...I wont deny it, I'm a straight Ridah you dont wanna fuck wit me!.....


pack a gat and hunt you down, wit two clips, bustin full rounds/
load my tongue n flip some lyrics fuckin wit ya mental spirits/
melanin associate on a mission to make you feel this/

pronounce you dead by last supper you suffer when I start to utter/
articulation formed to rhymes, greatest of all times, lyrically smother/

write a multi, convinced you'll win, insult me means comitting sin/

dome split on impact of substantial wit as I construe/
took a bullet think you slick, feelin like pac cuz ya got slugged/

as I recline write this rhyme, wait for reaction on every bone I fractioned/


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Maxi, as usual, came very hard and creative, but a few lines were kinda corny lol:

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I'm Strapped-To-Grapple, this bitch stay 'LOCKED DOWN' like 'LIGAMENT' joints wit 'SHACKLES'/

Scabs-Off-Flesh, u definitly 'CUTT THROAT', count how many times i 'STAB-NECKS'/

Vote-Hot-For-Us, i guess u can 'REST IN PIECE', when i Throw ur 'CARCUSS' into a 'HELECOPTERS'/
Ripped wit 'CHOPPERS', try to spit 'HOTTER', i 'BURST IN FLAMES' when i fill ur body wit 'MOLTEN LAVA'/
Boltin robbers, broken Jaws-Up, like Armadilloes im gonna scare ya 'NUTS' so u can 'BALL UP'/

Wire tha troops, Illicit u so 'STUPID' u thought punching 'CRACK' was 'DRUG-ABUSE'/ --LOL


A Sick-Sentence to Spit-Lessons grab and Grip-Intestines, snatch ur 'LEGS OFF' now u cant 'KNEEL' for 'FORGIVENESS'/

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hmmm this is hard, i liked alotta illicits lines, they were ill, diffrent style; maxi did have more multies and punches....

vote = TIE  ;D

 -{bLaDe}

maxi-padz:
fuck u whore.. lmao

1-0

peace
~1~

Naz-T:

--- Quote ---


3rd battle, but now I'm ready, spittin steady approximately/


underesitmate MEEE, you bound to lose ya neck/
keep my Sanityyy always, but still lackin respect/

took a bullet think you slick, feelin like pac cuz ya got slugged/
smacked and mugged for ya riches you dont possess cuz you  broke slut/

as I recline write this rhyme, wait for reaction on every bone I fractioned/


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These were some nice lines, you had more, but some of them didn't rhyme, Like : "aproximatly"
Nice Verse, I think you should have tried som multis, But I think you did good. You came ill, Some nice disses.
tight.


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I Attack-The-Battle and Snap-Ya-Bladder, u think its 'NO BEEF' u 'MIS-STEAKEN' u simply Lack-Cattle/

U have 'NO STRETCH', at this battles end, u 'CUM SHORT' like old men 'HAVING-SEX'/


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You had some nice punches but the multis were most impressive, But I think you came pretty ill, And hardcore. I like your wodplay..

I think Illicit came hard, Nice flow too. I think If U add some multis and maybe some mo wordplay you would have gotten a better result, anyway I think Maxi came hard too, so you both came hard, So I ma have to go for Maxi's wordplay and multiz.

Vote - Maxi

Peace





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