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...: bLaDe //VS\\ DeadSouLjA :...

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Hittman:
Very Controversial. :) Anyway:

Blades Review

This Verse Was Strong. It Had Some Good Disses, But On The Flow It Wasn't Amazing - Like TimeLock Said, It Was On And Off, Very Choppy. I Found Myself Getting Lost During Rapping This Verse. Overall Though Nice Verse, Some Good Points In This Joint.

Bars To Remember:

"see we kinda like michael jackson, Im BAD, my lyrics DANGERIOUS and INVINCBLE//
Splling yo blood on the floor, your HISTORY, stuck in this verbal RITUAL//"

Bars That Should Of Been Left Out:

"deadsoulja? fuck i resserect you just do murder you again//
sucking dicks in your after life, cut off your ballz wid a knife, leavin u screamin in immence PAIN//"

DeadSouljahs Review

This Was A Very Solid Verse. I Found Myself Flowing Along To It Nicely, And It Was A Nice Verse. Flowed Nicely, And You Had Some Hard Lines:

"my arrival has increased da rate of EMCEE MORTALITY , blade-another victim of DEADSOULJAH's feared HOSPITALITY,tired of your fuckin NEUTRALITY/
bringin an end to all signs of VITALITY, blade was born with an undetectable lyrical ABNORMALITY, this battle is a mere FORMALITY/"

If You Rhymed That Good All The Time, I'd Be On Your Nuts. *Please Don't Take That Literally* It Wasnt All Like That Though Unfortunatly,  But When I Came To Try And Find Some Played Out Bars, I Realised How Fresh This Verse Really Was. Good Shit DedaSouljah.  

Overall - I Think You And Blade Have Got Very Similar Styles...But On This Joint DeadSouljah Came The Better, With Nice Flow And Managing To Keep Some Hard Lines, Whereas Blade lacked Slightly With His Flow:

Vote - DeadSouljah

Reef:
Blade Review
Tight shit.. the flow wasnt nothing special but u hit pretty hard an had some good disses, its a bit all over the place.. jumping for thing to thing.. but overall good verse.

Best Barz
keep an eye on your BILOGICAL-CLOCK, cuz 'hope' is nonexistant when you face my LYRICAL-SHOCK//
Put yo lights OUT, with my SOCK, over your deceased body i CRIP-WALK, leaving you LINED-IN-CHALK//
Banging your Head against the CONCREATE, shattering your jaw fragments all over the STREET, now your a 'CHIP-OFF-THE-OLD-BLOCK"//

DeadSoulja Review

Like logic said, your verse flowed well, and was pretty fresh. You hit hard wit some of your disses, and there are very few flaws in the verse.

Best Barz
my arrival has increased da rate of EMCEE MORTALITY , blade-another victim of DEADSOULJAH's feared HOSPITALITY,tired of your fuckin NEUTRALITY/
bringin an end to all signs of VITALITY, blade was born with an undetectable lyrical ABNORMALITY, this battle is a mere FORMALITY/
They were some pretty tight bars dude.. Keep rhyming of that quality up!

Overall it was a good battle, two dudes wit similar styles.. I think DeadSoulja won this one with his flow, an jus the hardness..
Vote: DeadSoulja

peAce

DeaDSouLjaH:
2 very well xplained votes..... thanx for votin logic n gareefa ..
umm...blade...wat abt apocalypse's vote.. i still want it dq'ed..

DeaDSouLjaH:
okay...i'm considerin dat...apocalypse's vote has been disqualified... n since logic..voted after dat... da score stands 4-3...deadsouljah is claimin victory..
nice battle
pz

min0rity:
this is my review as promised.....


blade:

you came ill for REAL...you had some outstanding metaphors..they were creative but some lines weren't needed and some didn't make sense


bars i'm feeling:


Put yo lights OUT, with my SOCK, over your deceased body i CRIP-WALK, leaving you LINED-IN-CHALK//
Banging your Head against the CONCREATE, shattering your jaw fragments all over the STREET, now your a 'CHIP-OFF-THE-OLD-BLOCK"//

dope shit!!!

Watch as This VERSE, SUBMERSEs yo face into your own blood, screamign for NURSE, fuck that jus bring a HEARSE//
i pimp slap yo TRANSVERSE ass, backwards, spinning yo head in REVERSE, fucking with me is like facing the MUMMYS-CURSE//
see we kinda like michael jackson, Im BAD, my lyrics DANGERIOUS and INVINCBLE//
Splling yo blood on the floor, your HISTORY, stuck in this verbal RITUAL//


ill!!!
= 4.15



deadsouljah

to be honest, i can't believe that you're actually a rookie...your shit was flown beautifully imo although you had couple corny lines but for the most part it was ill

bars i liked:



haha..BLADE  ?? God told me that b4 this battle u had PRAYED, coz u knew this is a battle u cant EVADE/
into oblivion you will slowly FADE, after experiencin this ryme CASCADE, each word hittin u like an exploding GRENADE/
Anotha MELANIN Civil WAR, a battle between two emcees no one can IGNORE, cause this is anotha deadsouljah ryme purely HARDCORE/
aint no rookie ANYMORE, your death only i can ACCOUNT FOR, i'll jus add your head to my living room DECOR/


DOPE INTRO and nice transition


my arrival has increased da rate of EMCEE MORTALITY , blade-another victim of DEADSOULJAH's feared HOSPITALITY,tired of your fuckin NEUTRALITY/
bringin an end to all signs of VITALITY, blade was born with an undetectable lyrical ABNORMALITY, this battle is a mere FORMALITY/      


good creativity..


suckaz on da board say i bite your STYLE , but da difference between me n u is dat i'm purely HOSTILE/
my rymes like land so FERTILE, got a ryme STYLE thatz far more VERSATILE , n a flow thatz faster than the NILE/

nice explanation

4.2


vote = deadsouljah

like i said no way i'm dickriding or whatever..i don't even know deadsouljah and i actually owe blade a favor for hooking me up with acid pro so obiviously got nothing against him...but whatever..go ahead and DQ the vote for NO REASON

its kinda funny how motherfuckers be crying when YOU DON'T vote often but when you started to vote THEY STILL crying lmao...lmao






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