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i want some one to tell me if its tite!

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MaD_DoGG:
yo im a white boy that can ryme/
when i rap its a crime/
so bad im still doing time/
fuck the earth/for what its worth/
ima leave the rest of them niggaz on this forum in the dirt/
so bad it'll hert i mean fuck you'll be in the hers/
my rap styles like a curs to and MC trying to fuck with me/
any body will bleed when they fuck with me cuz im a crazy crip dont fuck with this/
you might get my pissed and i'll have to hit you with this bottle of cris that cost 600/

i want some one to tell me if its tite!

Hittman:
Wow, That Was Really Tite ::)

Hittman:

--- Quote ---yo im a white boy that can ryme/
ima leave the rest of them niggaz on this forum in the dirt/
im a crazy crip dont fuck with this/

--- End quote ---


Is It Only Me Who Sees A Problem Here?

NoT:
I'm going to try to be kind... that was the single worst excuse for rhyming in the history of rap. Nobody, and I mean nobody, has ever come worse than that. Basically, work on every aspect of your craft because they all need improvement.

Maestro Minded:

--- Quote ---I'm going to try to be kind... that was the single worst excuse for rhyming in the history of rap. Nobody, and I mean nobody, has ever come worse than that. Basically, work on every aspect of your craft because they all need improvement.
--- End quote ---



aaah Come On .. NoT, you're being biased now.. cant you cee the punches and metaphors he got?? ::) .. he got talent fo sho :-/

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