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!!!VOTE~~DEADSOULJAH VS AMC~~VOTE!!!

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DeaDSouLjaH:
AMC, u down ? ?
if yes..
then here are da rules

RULES
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bar limit: 10-15
3-0 K.O
first to 4 , wins

i will drop if u accept..
pz

DeaDSouLjaH:
hey AMC where are u  ? ?
u down ?

DeaDSouLjaH:
checkin in...
no beef.....aight??!!

...IT HAS BEGUN...


this battle between me n AMC is ON, your rymes aint even worth expanding UPON/
your lines only bring out a YAWN, i'm da KING on the chessboard while you're just a PAWN/
a sinkin ship is wat u STEER, the pain u develop after this is so SEVERE/
gonna blast you n your lines to a different STRATOSPHERE, as I take this ryme up one more GEAR/
i'm abt to DETONATE, i'll give u no time to spit back and RECRIMINATE,you're up against a ryme HEAVYWEIGHT/
your ryme aint even worth a topic of DEBATE, itz so low u jus cant RATE, as these rymes just expand and INFLATE/
u struggle to make two words MEET, u gotta take ryme lessons like learnin to walk on two FEET/
i'm givin u no time to RETREAT, when i COMPETE i want my rymes to cause total DEFEAT/
umm..who is this fool AMC?, this fool has yet to learn his basic "A-B-C"/  
he's so wack to even be called an EMCEE, his rymes worthless like a scratched CD/
time started with the BIG BANG, but itz gonna end if u just opened your mouth and SANG/
hittin words at u like tennis balls from da racket of MICHAEL CHANG, u jus ducked and RAN/

...I REST MY CASE...

doggmastah:
8)Deadsouljah, u said? fuck with me in wcc and you'll be fuckin' dead/
DeadsouljaH, NO! YA SOUL-IS-DEAD ! so eez back on yur comments and choose anotha thread/
I'm da rhyme SOLE-FIST-DREAD, with six ton rhyme-bullits goin' to make holes in ya head/
so turn ya head bitch and see how my bad-mad-head get's this battle instead/
if this yur best rhyme it won't beat the one's from me i call bad, step back and don't waist time, go to bed/
yur mistaken ,ships sinkin' i do not steer i'm in a submarin launchi'n rhyme-torpedos to put ya in fear/
when you thought you  beated me u weren't even near, i beated u so fast u even haven't got time to cover yur rear/
my rhymes are into stratosphere cuz their so high and make suckas like ya  goin' in disppeare/
get yur automatic-rhyme-vehicle while i put da sixt gear,  yur all wrong , R do not mean run but rear/
I'm gonna make ya static-slime-vehicle look like wack shit real swift  and tresspass you like a spear/
yur wannabe-disses do not scare me, i'm the very essence of emcee/
i'm callin' ya rhymes wannabe-pisses  so u  came to me to see how hard an mc can be/
the fool's on you try to beat Roland Garros pros? u must be one of those hoes/
try to beat my best tennis-rhyme-shot and twist yur toes cuz cuz my racket-rhyme-shoot only the best match-point-flows/


Peace! Now vote!  

KVB:
Good battle...


DeadSouljah: Above average verse... solid punchlines and vocabulary as usual... far from your best... but still dope.

AMC: Good opening, but you fell off later in the verse, still
a good rhyme... some elements dope and some average... I loved your last bar.

Good battle... DeadSouljah won it with consistently powerful punchlines.. AMC wasn't quite on his level here, but nevertheless an enjoyable battle.


Vote = DeadSouljah

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