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!AMC VS GAREEFA! (goin' fo' whateva...)lol--

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Reef:
commin out ready 2 destroy any whack-ass emcee who choeses 2 go aganst me, in this case AMC//
you gotta know the consequences of tryin my patience, cuz your down 2 ur last line of defence//
an it cruble like your in a 'quake an see yo mother it gets me in the mood for rapin'//
AMC, you best believe im so ill it took 30years to conceive me, dont give a fuck how your percieve me//
as long as i dont get wannabes like AMC decieving me//
i use my own fuckin hand to impale yo punk ass inscribe my name in ya head make u rememba me like the holy grail//
this will make you sick, like i am in the head, your turning pale//
your blood turned blue an your cold, welcome to my world, now i kick yo ass harder than a kangeroo//
my tounge is back flippin' while your face is rippin' peelin' yo skin is easier than paint-strippin'//
ima fuckin schizophrenic my rhymes are more powerfull than acid cuz they hallucinogenic//
kill you quicker than 100 acid tabs an 50 mushshrooms, i snort dictonarys up like they are fuckin perfume//
thats my fuckin ill rhyming, beatin me is an uphill struggle like mountain climbing//
im the kinda emcee that will reduce AMC to his fuckin knees, hit him so blood is all he pees//
now why you fuckin wit me? I survived abortion, came out an the first thing i done was give yo mom a portion//
nine months l8er you were born, that was tha day i was re-born//
my #1 goal on earth to kill anyone who steps-up, but im tha one who crept up//
an slit yo muthakuckin throat!


Sorry about the ending lol.. it was a bit whack... now people.. VOTE!!

DeaDSouLjaH:
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AMC REVIEW
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well u've got gr8 flow ..but sum times i think your mind seems to go astray ... try expandin more on your lines...if you do dat..u'd be dope.. otherwise it was a gr8 ryme..spit more shit homie... :) :)

GAREEFA REVIEW
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gareefa impressed me in the middle of his ryme.... like he said..his last few lines..werent very good... but he showed flashes of brilliance in this ryme  :o..but some lines lacked a flow..  

takin all of the points above into consideration i think i'll go for GAREEFA...he seemed to be da clear winner in this battle...
vote=GAREEFA

pz

PS-AMC ...we got a battle man ...

Reef:
Thanx for voting dude...

'Illicit':
AMC got a good flow, but some lines were a lil corny,  good shit though overall.

Gareefa is lil inconsistent in his flow, but he got some killer lines in there, also a few corny ones.

vote: Gareefa, cuz he was harder overall

TimeLock:
Gareefa won this... his punchline hit way harder than amc's and were more complex.


my vote =Gareefa

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