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infinite59:
At the resteraunt, mind stimulated, picture you across the room simulated/
Thought for a moment, was that you smilin across at me, contemplated/
Only for a quick second then tossed the subject, walked over and you/
Asked me to stop and talk for a second, wouldn't have guessed it/

It's early 2002 just meeting you, you look beautiful, I sat beside you/
Asked you your age, you tried to avoid the subject, 3 years between/
Damn you look clean, Could you be my Queen, beautiful as Allah's grean earth/
I thirst for water, wanna lay beside ya, mind hides the thoughts and pauses/

Acknowledging those others sitting next to me, a recovering parapalegic lady/
Complementing her on her successes, you stood astonished/
Like why does this guy, care about this person he doesn't even know/
Now we're vibin on eachothers beauty, but thinkin your to young for me/
Yo I'm a ghost, I start to slide out the back entrance, your friends stops me/
Did I mention she wants your number, what you doing tonight/
You could come to my party if you like, Hey yo she may be too young/
But here's the number anyway, cause she looks beautiful, so now I pray/
That she calls it don't get lost in my cautious nonsense, pick up the phone and dial/

Doggystylin:
overall ....nice shit, it didnt flow well but nice storytelling and nice use of vocabulary

infinite59:

--- Quote ---overall ....nice shit, it didnt flow well but nice storytelling and nice use of vocabulary
--- End quote ---


Thanks dog, it was a keystyle, so my flow may have been off.

'Illicit':
yeh dogg, i was feelin that.... nice storytelling.  
forget the flow, it was cool.  

keep it up,  next time u on aim, and i am too, i need to holla at you bout muslims n stuff.  i got some questions.

maxi-padz:
LOL@i need to holla at u botu muslims n stuff
dunno y but that shit made me laugh the way u said it.. lol i dunno im kinda bored


this shit was nice tho.. it flowed aight vocab was good and good story tellen..
keep spitten dat shit

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