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**Naz-T ~ VS ~ AMC**

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doggmastah:
>:(This is a fucked up situation... we voting on ya threads and yall do not even vote in here! Damn! why do they not vote? I'm gettin' tired of this...Vote!VOTE!VOTE!VOTE!

NoT:
Alright, AMC... I know you're going to think I'm beefing when I say that I'm voting for Naz-T but there are some things that are fundamentally wrong with ya style. Don't get me wrong, I love the way you always come rougha and ready for battle but here are some things you need to improve on:

1) Multisyllable Rhyming. Basically, you just rhyme the last syllable of every line with pieces of that line and the lines after and before it. This is in part related to my second suggestion regarding vocab. Here's an example of what you do:
Surprise, bitch! Here's AMC to give ya tha itch!/
allways dope rhymes to, i'll get ya down int ya knees witch/

Instead, try doing sometEnhing more like this:
Enough with these formalities, let's get to the fatalities ~
You really wanna battle me, the man who eats emcees like greens?! ~

2) Vocabulary. A vast and varied vocabulary is an essential piece of every good emcee's arsenal. It's really hard to make multisyllable rhymes when you're using single syllable words. Just read more and look up any words you don't understand in the dictionary, that's all I can say.

3) Use more wordplay. Wordplay is so important. Simply put, no emcee can be any good without wordplay. Wordplay does not involve sticking all of your rhymes in quotation marks or writing them in caps as some people seem to think it is (LOL). Wordplay involves using staples of poetry such and metaphors, similes, and alliterations in your rhymes. Here is an example of wordplay:
I'll liquify and drink you just to piss you off ~

4) Expand your Horizons. There are many more ways to attack people than just with knives and guns and in order to make allusions to historical events and things in literature you need to have a better knowledge of the world around you and do more reading.

VOTE = Naz-T... because I saw examples of all of these things in his rhymes.

Naz-T:
thanks for voting NoT :) some nice advices too..

2 - 1  keep on votin!!

One Love!

doggmastah:
I'm takin' notes... See i ain't no American or English native... All the words of English i know are from my own research and auto-didact... my specialities are  French, Portuguese and Spanish! But around here no one nows any good French , Spanish or Portuguese... so i'm tryin' to do my best homie, and by the way... i beated Flowmatic once,  i beated Pelon , some battles i had have been pretty close ones,and been havin' good critics from yall. So if i do thaht with all the limitations i have, seems like if i keep havin' good advices like yours i'll improve myself.
But... do not try to say i do not read, i read alot more than you all may think... See i ain't no ignorant: I have a PHD on latin languages man... no bullshit I speak fluently Latin, French, Portuguese, Spanish and Italian, and  a French teacher at a school  Here's da proof:
Je suis professeur de Français au Portugal et j'enseigne tous les niveaux de Français. (French) Galia lingua magister in schola sum.(Latin) Sou professor de Francês em Portugal (Portuguese)... need more? I don't mean to be disrespectfull, i just wanna learn... And i battle as much as i can to improve.
Tell me to rap in some of those languages and you'll see metaphors aliterations, antithesis, and every retorical style figures you want! Peace!(again and again...)

ToNe1904:
ima vote inna sec. but yur guys rules are all fuked up lol. How is it "first to 4" and "4-0 is a KO"?? lol. whetha u get 4-0, or 4-3....its still a win. shoulda been 3-0 is a KO or sumthin. but thas coo lol.

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