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ToNe1904:

--- Quote ---lol see, there r homo rhymers on the board too ^^

 -{bLaDe}
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lol shut tha fuk up! n go respond to our battle lightweight! lol

infinite59:
1. Metaphors- and try to use more metaphors that have to do with death, gay bashing, guns, bombs, military, etc.... so your shit comes with a lil more intensity.

2.  Dictionary, thesarus.. improve your vocab, it wouldn't hurt for you to read and learn more, knowledge is key, even if it's knowledge on drug trade, you can turn that into some ill shit

3.  Your illest shit was when you were rhyming about killing yourself, well flip it around, and take it out on them dog.. peace

Doggystylin:
yo tom creativity is huge!, try to come up with new shit that no one has said before, ya know? be original, and reading and all really helps, cause the more knowledge you got, the more shit u can talk about, bring up everyday shit that people can feel and relate too, i think thats all i can say for now....peace

Maestro Minded:
1. Metaphors

When you're battelin someboby, try to imagine how you will defeat/kill him... ex: "like a dragon im blastin fire, removing your derire"

2. Punches.

you gotta have punches  .. punches is like a very hard uppercut, when the target is open.... currently you only have funny punches, but you also need to write sum hardcore and iller kind of them

3. Vocabulary

like infinite said, you gotta start rhyming with iller vocabs. try to have longer rhyming words and use sum multis too



i hope it helped

infinite59:

--- Quote ---1. Metaphors

When you're battelin someboby, try to imagine how you will defeat/kill him... ex: "like a dragon im blastin fire, removing your derire"

2. Punches.

you gotta have punches  .. punches is like a very hard uppercut, when the target is open.... currently you only have funny punches, but you also need to write sum hardcore and iller kind of them

3. Vocabulary

like infinite said, you gotta start rhyming with iller vocabs. try to have longer rhyming words and use sum multis too



i hope it helped


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Word... and MULTI'S... a great example of that is Eminem's Slim Shady LP, try to rhyme 3 or even 4 words in one sentence, and even try to rhyme the last word in the sentence for like 5 straight bars or more, Kane is a good example of that.

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