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Illicit a.k.a. CeeRide vs. M Dogg - Vote Now

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M Dogg™:
Rulez is simple
16-20 lines
first to 4 votes, 3-0 being a KnockOut

Alright 'Cuz, This is an I.E. thang,
The best must clash at the top, old school meets new
Alright, bet

Thin line between love and hate, respect and fear
In this comeback, they ain't no children here
They ain't no room for little bitches claiming shit
Like this lil' rida saying he Cee, guess he a Crip
Trick, you only a color, and I ain't talking blue
I'm talking a color that is more suited to you
You see, blue is part, but with others this colors in flight
Your color is rainbow, So I'ma call you Rainbow Bright
You can't fuck with me, my star will never stop shining
I'll leave your body in a place were they'll never find
Here's the details, I go from behind, and smoother you with plastic
Kid nap you and call home your home and hold you for ransom
Tie you up, and watch your ass struggle to breath
I gave you air holes just to let the suffering last longer for me
Your parents reject to offer, so I have to lay you to rest
Then a man comes with a wire and bullet proof vest
Shot him in the head, another cop dead, wasn't a contest
Look you in the eyes, knew you messed with the best
After your death, they only morned 'cause I killed you
I made you famous like that Billy the Kid fool

REGULATORS!!!!

'Illicit':
bitch please, old school could neva defeat new/
sell ya bitch-skillz and respect my verbal value/
i cross-over like hardaway, find yourself a new part-to-play/
cuz whatcha spit right now is bad breath and tooth-decay/
better pray, battle me pay for postive sur-vey/
no matter how hard u try, im da new cat, revealing harshness/
half ya shits erroneous, next time come better, im fastidious/
only battle who deserves my appearance, takin prevalence/
cant believe im get challenged by this wannabe cali resident/
ima prove that oversees citizins can strive and be dominent/
never hesitant, breakin fools wit my tools, play by my rules/
only sitck wit my crew, got beef wit you? thats cool/
im committed to spittin lyrics everyday when im steppin up/
next up m dogg, ima rip n fuck you up/
interrogating like matlock, got rhymes that make ya star-struck/
hard-hittin and painful like castration without anaesthesia/
take you out ya hood, loan u money, have u raped and then i leave ya/
im mista pimp "wack rappers", til they notice i make em scatter/
got flows? thats cool, if not i come-after/
question my ability, u bound get dethroned'a/

aight beat this lol.  

VOTE YALL!!!!!!!!

peace    CeeRide aka  Illicit   (cuz everybodies bitchin bout my name)

ToNe1904:
tight battle yall. very close.
I was feelin M-Doggz "Rainbow Bright" line. lol that shit had me crackin up. i think his shit flowed a lil better then Cee's. The second half of his rhyme, was no where near as tight as tha first half tho.
Cee'z shit was way stronger with tha vocabulary. i thought he had a good mixture of raw shit, with metaphorical rhymes.
Even tho M-Doggz had a better flow to it, i think it had more weak pointz then Cee's did, his was more consistent. So ima hafta vote Ceeride (Illicit) on thiz one. M-Dogg, if u dont wanna count mah vote cus im currently battlin u at tha moment, then itz up to u. but i aint bein biased on it. good shit yall

M Dogg™:
*Cracks Nuckles, kicks back and drinks some Henny*

I tried to expand some and write a little story, ya' know, and little story like Slick Rick, for the second half. Sorry if it was weak, not enough punchline, but I wanted to pant a picture.

1-0 Illicit

TimeLock:
nice shit M-dog but i have to agree with tone
i like how u dissed his poser crip wanna be azz though lol ;D
you'll see i did to in most of my crew battle with him...lol ;D
in all fairness M-dog u lost this one.

My Vote=CeeRide

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