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Maestro Minded:
sorry .. my misstake


2-1

keep voting

bLaDe:

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"Fake-Fool-Tone" increazes hiz level by imitating maxi-padz//
spitting long barz combined with punchez and "iron-stabz"//

like Machiavelli, im flawless, i blast every situation i grabz//
no need for right now....

cuz "like Atlas", i crack your flow as eazy as a "book of mapz"//*


no disrespectin, but your white shit is being pulverized like antrax//
ive already blasted you once, but now you want a rematch//



cuz like Medusa, when you cee this flow, you'll be transformed to stone//**
after our battle, your rhymes stinks so much, you'll be forced to steal "guccy-cologne"//

beat who-ever you want, I-Bo will still own the rap-throne//
when im delivering antrax-letters, i do it like Karl Malone//
i give 10% but like "Jackson and Snoop" you say "Leave Me Alone"//


the only way to tuch my level is to produce a "identical-clone"//



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Here we go, tha lyrical version of Holyfield vs Tyson, I-Bo tryna win by BITIN-MAH-SHIT only succeedin by reWRITIN-MAH-HITZ/

Drownin I-Bo in hiz own rhymez, now yah SWIMMIN-IN-SHIT/

So jus SIMMER-BITCH, you couldnt fade ToNe if u was a DIMMER-SWITCH/

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ToNe hittin yah wit thiz QUICK-SHIT, Kali, leave yah WIG-SPLIT, now yah hopin fah suicide, yah got yah muthafuckin WRISTS-SLIT/


Im leavin yah bloody wit tetinis, cus u was stabbed wit mah RUSTY-SHANK/

Im like a dawg thas been locked up, eatin nuthin but RAW-MEAT while I-bo walkin past carryin a bag of DAWG-TREATS/

Yah scared before we battle, so I-Bo go see yah shrink n he goan STRESS-CONFIDENCE/
Cus u fucked wit ToNe, n im spittin at u harder then 2pac at a Bad Boy PRESS-CONFERENCE/


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aight close battle, tones bars were too long and sum of em lacked flow, ibos shit, punches and all were gud but weak in sum areas ...

My Vote - IBO ... his shit sounded betta

peace

 -{bLaDe}

Maestro Minded:
3-1

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M Dogg™:
I-Bo came a little better here.

4-1 I-Bo

maxi-padz:
this was a tight battle...

HARDNESS - I-Bo he went in for the kill
MULTIS - Tone he slammed down multi syllable multis
PUNCHES - I-B0 his were harder hitting.. Tone sum advice u used sum played punches like the tyson-hollyfield.. u neede get mo original and creative
FLOW - I-Bo took this with a far superior rhyme scheme

ima have to give this to I-Bo.. he jsut came harder with a better flow... tight battle tho...

I-B0's BARS TO REMEMBER

"Fake-Fool-Tone" increazes hiz level by imitating maxi-padz//   good personal punch

like Doggys Angles, you have good beat, but still your rhymez flopz// i liked that

and ur creative shit was good to like the atlas line

TONES BARS TO REMEMBER

Im like a dawg thas been locked up, eatin nuthin but RAW-MEAT while I-bo walkin past carryin a bag of DAWG-TREATS/ lol@that was tight

U wanna beef, well im Jayo, u Rocafella n ima "CATCH-EM-IN-THA-MORNIN"/
Caught u off guard cus ToNe known tah BLAST-WITOUT-WARNIN/  lol@that was tight to

sum mo advice for both of u... u got sum mad nice punches and lines.. but u also got mad fillers... that shouldnt be there... like u just put them there caus they rhymed stay away from that... otherwise tigth shit... with punches and multis we need more of this

vote- I-Bo

peace
~1~

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