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AlerG:
deciding what rhymes-weak, multiply yours times-three/
fuck a style, i ain't quitten till your fucken lines-cease/
burn out your clutch, turn-out-your-rap/
only money you gettin is what you earn-on-ya-back/
paid for the three inch slit between-the-legs/
scream-and-slay, touchin me you'd better dream-and-pray/
i spell out the long story and tales of six-cities/
you sound pretty, coughing up cum and dick-spitting/

ah fuck it, i'm just clowning, nevermind me, peace.

infinite59:
BL7Review:  Rhyme 1 Review: even up your bars a bit... improve your vocab a notch... use more metaphors... and most importantly keep spittin and blessin the board

Quotables:

I love hip-hop/
nigga my shit's hot/
any haters step up/
many haters get shot/

Played Out Rhymes:

that's what you get for tryna mess with my rhymes/

infinite59:
Review of second rhyme:  Yo.. the second half of this rhyme was extremely tight.. I can see you are improving.. keep blessing the board homie  

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