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How to write nice rhymes, by homie bLaDe

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bLaDe:
Hello everyone, i have noticed many of you homies always write mean stuff....dont worry, today homie bLaDe will teach you how:

Example from deep discussiion me and homie CeeRide had:

paradox203: hey ceeride
CeeRide1984: hey paradox
paradox203: get me honey from the  :P beehive  :D

^ notice, the nice greeting between two rhymers ^

so this small greeting has shown us the first example:
"Hey homie CeeRide!/
get me honey from the bee hive  :D "

Now my friends, first rule i nwriting nice rhymes:
THEY HAVE TO BE NICE!

now unfortunatly homie CeeRide did not understand this concept.  So he replyed with:

"ceeride gonna give u a free-ride to hell"

Umm as you can see, that wasn't very nice and didn't rhyme propaly

Which brings us to our next rule:
ALWAYS PUT A SMILEY IN YOUR NICE RHYME!

FOR eg:

paradox203:  hey big homie blade!/home u get laid!(insert smiley)
i hope u get big pay/damn homie u make my day!(insert smiley)

as you can see, i've clearly explaned it to him...but he still has yet to learn

his response:

the homie blade is a trip/ he deserves a mad whip/ bout to give him a brutal kick/ ruin his chances of usin his dick/   :D

^tut tut, now that totaly oppesses my 'hope you get laid' rhyme ... i mean how can i get laid if hes gonna kick my nuts?


Well that concludes my lesson for today folks, please submit a few bars of nice rhymes in this thread
THANK YOU

 -{bLaDe}

'Illicit':
aint this a bitch, if you were living next door id come over and drag u down the street naked till your skin peels.

its all gravy though.   ;D

peace

ToNe1904:

--- Quote ---aint this a bitch, if you were living next door id come over and drag u down the street naked till your skin peels.

its all gravy though.   ;D

peace
--- End quote ---


ummm....its good to see Blades teachingz are workin. LOL

Hittman:
Whats Blade Been Smoking?

'Illicit':
dont u start now too!!  

peace

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