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"Fuck A Bitch" Cipher.. Drop 10-20 Bars
infinite59:
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can someone pls review this ??? ;)
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i begin with my decree : "FUCK A BITCH"/
naw, u've only wanted those who were rich/
now, i've realised that u neva loved me from the start/
all u wanted was da money, and neva really wanted my heart/
u bitch, wat was it that went wrong?/
i'm gonna come back and haunt u lifelong/
howz "matt", i gonna pull out this gat/
make him feel da pain, 'rat-ta-tat-tat'/
lettin all this out on a piece of paper/
gonna make sure u gonna disappear into thin vapour/
alwayz thought i could trust u, in the end u just say: "FUCK YOU"/
i didnt deserve that bitch, for you i always pulled through/
now u gonna pay, pay with your life/
comin straight at you and plungin in this knife/
and boom, u died that very instant/
kiss your lipz and i declare u non-existent/
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Good shit... that was real... you came from the heart.. real life experience..peace
TimeLock:
tight shit Mr. Howl... on a mcee level... it's crazy in realtiy :o
lol ;D
ToNe1904:
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can someone pls review this ??? ;)
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i begin with my decree : "FUCK A BITCH"/
naw, u've only wanted those who were rich/
now, i've realised that u neva loved me from the start/
all u wanted was da money, and neva really wanted my heart/
u bitch, wat was it that went wrong?/
i'm gonna come back and haunt u lifelong/
howz "matt", i gonna pull out this gat/
make him feel da pain, 'rat-ta-tat-tat'/
lettin all this out on a piece of paper/
gonna make sure u gonna disappear into thin vapour/
alwayz thought i could trust u, in the end u just say: "FUCK YOU"/
i didnt deserve that bitch, for you i always pulled through/
now u gonna pay, pay with your life/
comin straight at you and plungin in this knife/
and boom, u died that very instant/
kiss your lipz and i declare u non-existent/
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good shit playa. lyricz are str8, u jus need tah flow a bit more i think. i mean, dont try tah plug too many wordz intah one line. like stay onna beat. itz different when u really rappin, cus u can jus spit tha wordz faster tah hit tha beat. but online, itz kinda hard when u readin it u know?? also maybe have more wordz inna line rhyme...otha then jus tha lass word everytime. but otha then that, tha shit was tight.
DeaDSouLjaH:
hey thanx...TONE and INFINITE .. will keep all the suggestions in mind..
infinite59:
Just six months ago you were in my arms.. now your gone.. and I'm trying to hold on... remain calm...tell me if it's working.... bitch!!... and if you think this is alot.... this is suppressed anger..
I'm takin your new boyfriend and sprayin bullet holes up in him/
Since your probably fuckin him, I'm strappin myself with the most explosive ammunition/
And going on suicide missions, cause I'm tired of trying to hide my anger/
At a world that's shown me know remorse and you were my only source of salvation/
But you traded all of that in, I fucked up and admitted it, you still pretend as if/
You don't feel the realness of this words I reveal through this lips/
We shared one last kiss, one last breathe we breathe as one/
And now that moment is forever gone, and I'm plummeting straight to hell/
Spelling my name in blood because the only thing I've ever loved I've lost/
I'm sufferin worse than Jews in the Holocaust, 'shedding more tears' than 2pac/
I fuckin lost since you disregarded me, I'm in a tail spin approachin a dead end/
My mind is blocked and locked up, it can't breathe, I can't see you and me apart/
I can't concieve a world so evil, we aren't even people or god's creatures/
Just fuckin animals out for more blood, so fuck it, pass me the fuckin glock/
I cock it back but only blank shots fired, I forced to suffer in a world under fire/
I cry out but nobody hears me, like a tree following, with no one around/
Does it still make a noise? Does he make your pussy moist, do you ride him like a rolls royce?
Do you like chokin me to my last breathe, and pullin out the ground beneath my last step/
Do you like not callin me back when I was there for you when you were lost/
Everything you told me I wasn't I ended up being the opposite/
I told you it wasn't game but words from the depths of my soul/
I opened up the world to you and took a hammer and smashed the globe in two/
And kept the other part for yourself, hung it up on the mantle/
Why the fuck you still keep my picture next to your bed?
Because as far as I'm concerned you treat a muthafucka like he dead/
Like I ain't over here, Like you don't see me, like I dissapear if you don't call back/
But let it be known that it's a fact that we can't escape what we create/
And one day it's all going to blow up in our fuckin faces, and then you'll want to save it/
But it will be too late, I turn my life in because the Lord is callin for it/
Should have done it back in 96 before I had to start going through all the bullshit/
After my first bitch left, and then you blessed me with your existence/
At the end of 99, and then in 2000 you were there for me, when it was not easy/
Nor was it fashionable, and for that I'll forever love you, but you give me the middle finger/
Like fuck you, but I still do think about you 22 to to 24 hours a day/
I don't disappear when you don't call me, I'm still here, your worst fears/
Are worse than you think they are, I'm getting in the car and driving far away from here/
Far away from all the hurt and pain, but my mind carries it with me/
There's no way away from anything... So I pray.. But my God's at war with their God/
I'm confused I'm lost, don't know who to trust, my thoughts are constantly contested/
But in my mind it makes complete sense, but naw they don't feel it/
So fuck it, fuck it, fuck!!!!!!
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