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I-BO ~vs~ Tom187um

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HBKid_Jr:
also i consider this 24 hours b/c at work on friday kane told me at work an did not go online untill 2 in tha mournin when i actually got tha chance to read your post,  now its saturday about 12:00 at night NY time

maxi-padz:
i though ti-bo took this quiet easily with hard disses and shit.. his verse was hella nice and well directed.. tom came pretty simplistik.. bu made me laugh in one place...
ur mom is a hoodrat/  lol whered that come from...
but it wasnt enough..
i-bo took this eaasily in the end
vote- I-BO

peace
~1~

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA:
IBO

sorry tom but i found alot of fill-ins in yur rhyme, it waz nothin compared 2 da shit u do in yur crew battles, those are SICK....maybe u didnt concentrate on this one enough or u rushed it prolly......I-Bo came very tight and maintained........

bLaDe:
both of u had sum tite shit there, but IBo came a lot titer wid his metas and punches ... Toms verse wuz hot for a starter

my vote : IBO

 -{bLaDe}

.:N-Imy:.:
First off I'll start with I-BO. Again as I said in your last battle you seem to come witha good line and follow it up with a line of poor standards. I dunno how long you been freestylin but there is room for improvement but of course every1 has room for improvement somewhere. Again lines that were catching:

"facing I-BO in a battle, always being uncenversant//
you'll get beaten in round uno,
lesson one: things aint always plesant//"

"now  this  board seems to have a huge overpopulation//
but there can only be one,
it aint difficult for niggaz comprehension//"

"you payed $5000 for a lyrical operation//
the doctor sprays you with rhymes, to make you have a inch of innovation//
useless,
the only way you can increase is with a "flow-transplatation"//"

As for Tom. I dunno wot he was thinkin whe he wrote that rime. Wether anger or just the fact that he did not have enuff time on his hands to write a proper and at least half decent battle rime. Good lines:

"now my rhymes may be simple/ but i pop u like a pimple/"

"ur mom is a hoodrat"

That hoodrat line had me in lafter for at least 5 mins.

This rime was mostly one sided and therefore easy to vote on. Tom lacked killer lines in this battle and nothing that really stood out or shon. Tom's rime seemed at one point to be even below average. I-Bo (feel like I keep repeatin myself) has room for improvement but from the wor dog there was only one winner in this battle

Vote: I-BO

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I just wanna point out (for no reason) that some ppl may disagree with wot I say but we all don't see rimes the same as others. I have now started to give a analyzation of rimes when I reply as I now feel in doing so I can give the battlers some constructive criticism or praise. When I do do this I don not intentionally go out to diss you or slam your rime I just try to tell the truth but not a str8 2 the point truth (if you know wot I mean). Also (although I don't know of many or any at all) when I vote on rimes they are taken from an un-biased view just becos I may be in beef with some1 or I know some1 quite well I am not gonna side or go against them and that is one thing I tend to keep becos there's no point in voting in a battle if there is one person you either like or dislike and not matter woth the other person's verse is like you still give them the vote or go against them.

Peace

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