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tha7th vs. Maxi-padz

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maxi-padz:
even tho that was way over 25 lines getz get this voted on..
nice battle
peace
~1~

infinite59:


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"U all noise" and ~no punches~ like u firing out "blank bullets"/
forgetten to rop half decent rhymes liek u sufferen "7 cases of amnesia"/

he couldn't even "punch-lines" if he boxed 8 "Herds-of-Zebras"/
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i don't "digest" weak Mcs like you jus because i'm "lack-flows-intolerant"/
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even if u held down "control B" all day ur lyrics still couldn be "bold"/

i switch mode, caus ya lyrics "old", i got u in "check-mate" they so "out-of-date" they growing "mould"/
imma be a "bandit" takin the "bone structure" out ya "hand" cuzz u leavin this battle "empty-handed"/
i getten stranded and DISSbanded caus i beat u wit "one" hand behind mah back "single handed"/

ur "reputation" is "unstable" like 10 elephants balancing on a "single cable"/
this iz "street fightz" and im "guile" and i got u in "wackness denial"/
ur lyrics so fucken wack, if i was a "computer virus" i wouldn stop to "delete ur file"/

maxi da "solo" lyrical military rippen u, like  dolls of VooDoo i poke u full of pins with "acu(te)punch(es)ure"/(acupuncture or acute punches)
i "disrupt ya"(disrupture), to philosophy tha7th philosohpies, like "CSN" on "ESPN" i hunt u for sport and take ur keystyes as "trophies"/

peircen ur "defensive armour", "shitting on u from great heights" in 'street fights' ~like the japs in pearl harbour~, i sink ya "battle shipz"/
with "catastropic punch hits" from "fool-proof hitz", (u a fool) i create "killa text" ima fucken "rhyming phenon" ~WHOSE NEXT~/ (goldberg)



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4.25- Alot of highlights from this one.  You need to try evening out your bar lengths and adding better rhyme structure, because parts of the verse didn't rhyme.  But your punches are unfadeable.  Good work homie.

infinite59:
Maxi, 7th, yo, the shit that I quoted is your highlights from your verse.... And I put stars around Maxi's line about "lack flows intollerant" that was a personal favorite of mine.

I had to leave for work, I'll break down the 7th's rhyme when I get back and pick a winner.

bLaDe:
Yo both of yo verses were just amazing, is a really hard decision ...


Da kortex gets my vote ...

peace

 -{bLaDe}

maxi-padz:
lol@kortex
1-0 me
uppen

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