im still on top...

[maxi-padz]

im da one dat makez dem girlyz hot, caus im on top/
got ya by 'surprize' when im spitten 'shock'/
got da game on lock while playa haten niggaz plot/
itz anonymous superstarz fuck da rest, check ya self/
we da bigga niggaz dat make u wet urself/
i ripped da fuck outta m dogg i want some one to test me/
n not get assassinated automatikly, it disgustz me/
WCC fulla niggaz who who cant touch me n bust n flee....

common ya'll its getten slow....

peace
~1~

[.:N-Imy:.]

You ain't on top....you fell off....sold out and went pop
While I'm making raps and got people bowing at my feet
You ran out of the kitchen cos you couldn't stand the heat
Making wot I deserve while you selling urself on the street
When I bike it and I'm on top of the hill
You still at the bottom cos people doubting your skill
You may think you the motherfucking man
But you can't fuck with me cos I'm superman
Circling ur rhymes and taking them out with one hit
Still trying to break me down but I'm built like a brick
I'm the only Knight here so take ur ass back to Suge and keep getting it fucked
And in years to come when I'm still on top....u gay ass fuck u'll still be getting ur ass-hole sucked


That was an aight rime....nuttin that great....weep and sleep people...weep and sleep...whate4 that means.

[AlerG]

alright rhyme, that was wackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk....keep using recylced shit and thinkin it's good ex. get out the kictchen cause you can't stand the heat. oh oh oh and here's a real creative line"you think your the motherfuckin man/but you can't fuck with me cause i'm superman/" damn it takes a genius to think shit like that...melanin always one level up, peace.

[maxi-padz]

lolz

[M Dogg™]

Bitch on top is really soft as a puppy
On difference is yout full of blood to make you quashy
Say my name again and I wouldn't blink
I'll down your ass like a shot drink
Say my name, shit you forget my Mystic
I ain't no bitch, nigga don't think
That I'd stand by and watch you speak my name again
'Cause your ass is really pussy like Ken
The list of names I've beat reads like an all star line up
Coming after me, you'll have better luck with a foster child
For I'm hungry, that's why I brought out Scrappy
To gather myself 'cause I wasn't happy
For real though, I can play you like B-Ball
I'm Shaq and you'll see me in the Hall
Make a list of the greatest rhymers this board has seen
I top the list in every catigory
Hardness, punchlines, OK maybe not vocabulary
But I got creativity from Feb to January
Consitant, and I still don't put peoples on blast
I take my shit and keep the wins silent and in the past
So shut your mouth, don't speak my name again
We still cool homie, but I can start a trend.

[maxi-padz]

lolz

[maxi-padz]

scrappy... thiz mah last rhyme to u aight
da only reason im busten back iz caus this forum needz to blow up again....

nigga ur shit aint 'sick' unless mah lyricz 'sicken' u and diagnose u 'ill'/
i got mah glock cocked i kill at will, when i spit blood will spill/
u think ur 'hot', well i blazt 'fire' n leave u a peice of 'burnt' nigga wit no skill/
i got 'pussy' emceez like scrapy, 'covered' daz why they call me 'maxi-paddy'/
nigga ur 'rhymez is shit', maybe itz caus ur 'breath stinkz'/
ur rapz couldn 'spark' if i handed u twigz n 2 'flintz'/
i'll have u doing 2 kilometre sprintz, trying to escape/
but i manipulate ur mind as thiz shit starts to esculate/
i seal yo fate, dont make a fucken move 'check mate'/
ya fucken retard, ur wack, and ur rhymez coppen a lyrical bitch slap/
come dat, seize now attack, now try n hit back, that shit u spat was crap/

1~

[DarkM@GICI@N]

my nigga maxi keep doin ya thug thang/
need reinforcements
spawn wont hesitate to let the slugs rain
I'll climb to the top just to let my nuts hang
we can be dual committee
make niggas look shitty while we bust brains/
I'm tired of this nonsense
time to stop these niggas progress
they cant beat the strongest
lyrisiss and thats a promise
thug immortal
chillin in hells escapade
when I spit I turn heads
like Caddy escalades
fukkin wit me and maxi
thats like nokkin  yourself out
catch us at the next house
fukkin your present and ex-spouse
all black lex wit the teck out
poppin these frail niggas
fukk these fe-male niggas/
we bleed hell niggas/

m&m (mass and maxi)

[maxi-padz]

our namez like a slug to ya chest in vain/
m&m not da fucken candy da lyrical reign/
itz like 2 titanz battling lyrical midget giantz/
caus ya''ll amature mafukkaz comparged to theze tyrantz/
we spreading heat like fucken fireantz/
fuck a cold stare we glaring hypnotik trance/
keep ya distance, caus thiz instance we rippen kidz in advance/
so get on yo kneez n pray for da whole earthz existance/
caus m&m bringing doomsday to ya doorstepz/
ya fucken dick wregz....

~1~

[DarkM@GICI@N]

uh oh its bout to get way ugly/
m&m is 2 niggas
thats verbally off the chains like a stray puppy/
its seem like there's been alot of drama lately/
nigga that wanna hate me
I suggest you pack that 3-80
for your mamma safety
you dont want me to be your nemesis/
touch maxi and get lyrically blown off the wcc premesis/
fukk leavin it wounded
I'm killin this
niggas paralyzed from the neck down
be feelin this...

Damn I fukked up this flow..... 'sup maxi!!

[maxi-padz]

nun just kicken it
get at me dawg on aim
peace
~1~

[.:N-Imy:.]

alright rhyme, that was wackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk....keep using recylced shit and thinkin it's good ex. get out the kictchen cause you can't stand the heat. oh oh oh and here's a real creative line"you think your the motherfuckin man/but you can't fuck with me cause i'm superman/" damn it takes a genius to think shit like that...melanin always one level up, peace.

ok it's nice to see some people can give criticism and not try to diss u at the same time. Also I keep using recycled shit?........and if I were a genius do you think I would be wasting rimes on this board.....also...man I ain't gonna waste my time....no point....as they say...."If you can't say summin good, don't say nuttin at all". See man it like a lot of people on this board. If u cool with them and they write a pretty weak rime then you tell them and help them as to where they went wrong but then you reply to people u barely know and just blether shit to them like u were the fucking king of rap. There always gonna be one rule for people and one rule for others and that will never be gone......so either treat people u don't know with the same respect as you would give your own dawgs or don't say shit......"don't judge a book by its cover" is a quote that can do here. People u don't know u just assume things but with people u know it cool if they do crap shit cos then you can explain to them. Also if I am correct this is the first time u have replied to a freestyle I done.....hhmmm...if I do all that recycled shit why did u not say it in the other rimes I did or were u just too much concentrating on the people you cool with's rimes?

[AlerG]

so either treat people u don't know with the same respect as you would give your own dawgs or don't say shit

that's some funny shit, cause i'm really only doggs with the illest boys in this forum (infinite, primo, mouse, maxi). my skills being 10 levels above yours give me the right to criticize your rhymes...

if I do all that recycled shit why did u not say it in the other rimes I did or were u just too much concentrating on the people you cool with's rimes?  

another point for me to prove here...of course i only look at the rhymes my boys made cause they the only ones that be spitten that i can read and say damn that's some tight shit...what i am trying to get across is don't spit after someone and say your shit is better when it's obvious that you was outrhymed...and the worst part was you went second...MELANIN, peace.

[.:N-Imy:.]

that's some funny shit, cause i'm really only doggs with the illest boys in this forum (infinite, primo, mouse, maxi). my skills being 10 levels above yours give me the right to criticize your rhymes...

This is what you call an assumption. See you just openly think you are better than me and that may be the case but I think you some wot over-rating yourself there

another point for me to prove here...of course i only look at the rhymes my boys made cause they the only ones that be spitten that i can read and say damn that's some tight shit...what i am trying to get across is don't spit after someone and say your shit is better when it's obvious that you was outrhymed...and the worst part was you went second...MELANIN, peace.

This bit kinda cracks me up cos it actually show how much attention you paid to wot I was saying and obviously don't have a clue wot I meant. Ok so let me explain it just so you can u-n-d-e-r-s-t-a-n-d!

"That was an aight rime....nuttin that great" <-- Now this part of wot I said is commenting on my own rime not Maxi-Padz. If I were talking about Maxi's rime I would have stated his name in there someplace....do you see his name in that line?

"weep and sleep people...weep and sleep...whate4 that means" <-- This part is me just talking shit cos I said that MY RIME was aight....MY RIME was NUTTIN GREAT and so I was pretending in this line that it was sum blazin shit


Also you say you only check out the illest boys on this board. No wonder you always reply to there rime. Maybe try replying to others cos I'm sorry that they can't help it an all as to be as good as you but sum ppl do go the lengths of replying to other people's rimes yet get no reply back. Also to say that you are better than some1 is just the tops on ignorance. You can't judge how good you are. Other people do. They tell you that you are good or shit and to be honest I ain't seen no rime of yours that bitch slap me and be like "God Damn...I'm 10 times better than you"....so I'll just hav to w8 another month to see if a rime crops up worth checking. Always check maxi's cos he usually summin worth readin but yours...I may have read one but u didn't seem to be worth the readin of your freestyles u put up so I'll jus have to w8 cos although you did manage to read the situation WRONGLY I'd still giv an honest opinion where as some1 with such ignorance as youself prolly just dick ride with you "so-called" illest boys on this site and tell the rest that they rimes wack.

So the lesson for you here is and read carefully now incase you mis-interprit the situation again:

1. Never think you are better than anybody else cos that's where you'll start to falter

2. FUCKING READ PROPERLY or ask befo u come in and blether your mouth off about how I did summin when I didn't but you thought I did becos you read it all wrong.

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