TAKE SOME PILLZ\I KILLZ\...BATTLE ME...

[I TO DA GEEZY]

ONE, TWO MIC CHECK\
MOTHAFUCKA I STAKE\
SPERATE YO BODY FROM YA SAUL\
THAN YOU ROLE THREW THA TOUNAL TILL YA GET TO THA HOLE\
ITZ LIKE YOSELF YOU JUS SEARCHED FO YO SAD DOWNFALL\
NEVER SHOULDA FUCKED WIT ME, SHOULDA AKSED WHAT I "VE STOLE\
ITZ AN M16 RIPPIN YOU HOES WHILE I ROLE\
I AIN NO KILLA BUT DON CONCLUDE NO FAST CONCLUSIONZ\
AFTER IM DON WIT YOU HOE, YOU"LL STILL BE NEEDIN INFUSION\
WHILE I BE LOOKIN FO THA SHIT YO DOCTOR BE USIN\
AIN NO FUCKIN POISON\
DON WON YO FAG ASS TO DIE\
CAZUE AFTER YOU REABILITATED YOU"LL KNOW IT WAZ THA BEST PLACE TO HIDE\
CAUZE IM ONE EVIL MOTHAFUCKA WONT LET YOU DIE TILL
I FINISH MY RIDE\
YOU"LL NEED NO PRIDE MOTHAFUCKA, SO FAG,RIGHT NOW YOU BEST DROP IT\
AND ILL BE USIN YOU HOE CAUZE IT BE STILL ON AND POPPIN\
YOU"LL BE AN UNWILLIN HUSTLA\
YOU"LL SPREAD MY SHIT WHERE I SAY\ AND I WILL KEEP YOU PRODUCTIVE\
THO YOU WILL NEVER GET PAYED\
YO POOR CONSISTANCY"Z REQUIRED\
AND I DON CARE IF YOU"Z TIRED\
IN FACT I DON UNDERSTAND HOW YOU BITCH GOT FUCKIN  HIRED\
AND HEAVN"T EVEN RETIRED\
I WOULD SUSPECT DAT SOMEHOW YOU GET FUKIN INSPIRED\
WHEN I FIRED I NOTICE YOU WAZ ALL EXSITED\
SHIT I AIN NEVER SAW A FAG LOVIN GUNZ\
OR A FAG DAT BE SHOOTIN WHILE HE RUNZ\
YOU PROBLY GET FUCKIN HARD WHILE YOU BE SPINNIN WIT ME\
I GEEZY IZ DA ONE MAN WHO CAN TURN FAG TO A BEAST\


HA HA..WHAT YALL THINK...

[Tecknine]

the begining...First off use wrod that rhyme!!!!...Use dope metaphors that are tight and cofusing...Make stuff make sence..i see people shit on here that dont make any sence at all..just a lil tip

[I TO DA GEEZY]

shit....i waz usin much mo realistic shit on my shit...but pipz waz sayin i need more metaphores to provoke tha mind...ya know?....
still...shit doesnt have to be real.....to make sence....take emz shit for example....itz still storytellin...