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"Mister Tongue Twister" Tell me how whack this is?

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Now_Im_Not_Banned:
This isn't exactly my type of rhyming, but of course I like to try new things...So today in class I was messsin around, and I started trying to rhyme as many words as possible withput using extra words...I knew it was gunna be whack, but I said, heck, I should give it a try, so I started off and I kept on adding and adding...Now I wasn't gunna post it here, because I usually dont post my whack rhymes here, but I showed it to some people on AIM, and they said it was dope...I know it's whack, and they are just messing around, but I just wanna get some more feedback about this...Check it yo:


Lyrics terrific, scientific, listed as gifted, lifted lyricists insisted, tried to get my wrist slit, risked it and missed it, given missions, collisions from bad vision equal incisions, wishin precision of Major Division, listen, never ass-kissin or dissin, decisions of riskin livin in prison, or found missin. Attention! Never messin perfection, mic testin, blessin, and caressin' my present, confessin' depression from tension did I mention aggression, this invention from a 3rd dimension, the end of my session, i'm guessin ya learned a lesson...

Now_Im_Not_Banned:
Thanks for the feedback..

Doggystylin:
LOL

nice! for a new thing

maxi-padz:
my style of rappen didn flow with it
so i wasn feelen it
to me it waz a bunch of big wordz dat rhymed thrown together n i aint feelen it
peace
~1~

ZILLA THA GOODFELLA:
Dat waz aiight.......I alwayz like shit dats different.......

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