Itching to spit -tell me what you think

[Jay ay Beee]

Your shit/is trivial/I'ma hit/the spiritual/complicated spot/this the dedicated hot/shit/that hits/like well trained dick/
metaphysical/super lyrical/rhyme/
sick of you shittin your self/tryna preserve your health/by prayin/sayin/"I ain't got the time"/
technical/physical/styles while keeping it free/
permanently/exotic/psychotic/Jay ay Bee/
you're temporarily exchanging/derailing/the pleasentries/
but when face to face/you're a disgrace/you lace/acting big/making big/but all fake/for god's sake/take/your shit out/you sounding like you got a dick in yo mouth/
you in it for the battle not the war/like a heard of cattle/your groupies/shiny like rupees/tryna score/
points but I'm swishing/you missing/I'm dissing/so discontinue/with the shit/else I'll continue/to rip/you to bits/

Tell me what you think

Safe

[Rud]

NOT BAD 4 A FIRST ATTEMPT! - BETTA THAN MINE! LOL

VERY SHORT BARS (BUT IT FLOWS WELL!!)

IM IMPRESSED (WE SHUD COMBINE!!)

peace

[Jay ay Beee]

NOT BAD 4 A FIRST ATTEMPT!

Hey you betta check yo self Villian!

I beenn doing this shit since I first registered!

We should battle!

[Rud]

AHH, MY BAD!

NEVA SEEN A POST OF URS ON HERE THATS ALL!!



YEH SURE WE CAN PISS AROUND WITH A BATTLE!


peace

[Joachim]

NOT BAD 4 A FIRST ATTEMPT! - BETTA THAN MINE! LOL

Ouch...

On the real going on your past ryhmes you can do alot better bro...

[Jay ay Beee]

Really?  Cause in the past I just got laughed at on this part of the forum - you sure you're not mistaking me for someone else?  

PS. I can't stand to look at the traitor's ugly face - lol j/k

[Joachim]

For real man, in your battles with NIK and SMS you did spit some tight lines bro...

PS. I can't stand to look at the traitor's ugly face - lol j/k

haha Sol did some horrible shit to Spurs

[Jay ay Beee]

LOL

Spurs are now officially a sad sad team......

[maxi-padz]

i dun like that style u jus spat man
u could do betta
~1