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Dissing Many Top Players !!!!!

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So Much Style:
2.3 outta 5

Ro J. Simpson:
i give it 1...just...better luck next time homie

.:N-Imy:.:
Yeah I done this a while ago as you can see and that was my first attempt at this. I never even checked it over to see if I could improve it. I just threw it on here to see wot people thought but I've changed it quite a bit now and myabe I'll post the second version of it at a l8r date

Sikotic™:
It was okay. Needs work but so do I. I'll just shut my mouth. :-X

.:N-Imy:.:


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It was okay. Needs work but so do I. I'll just shut my mouth. :-X

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Nah you don't need to shut up because Criticism is the best feedback you can get for a song cause it only makes you go back and try harder to improve the rhyme. Anyway I have worked on the rhmye quite a lot and I have changed it drastically and I may post the newer version on here sometime.

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