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Ro J. Simpson

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im bored, plz rate this rhyme outta 10
« on: July 18, 2001, 07:29:41 PM »
motha fuckin bitch slappin ho ass dyke
ill rip your fuckin eyeballs out and feed you your rites
run up in ya spot and tit fuck yo wife
but fuck it id get into too many fight's
now let me recite
string you all up and hang you like kite's
take all your bitches and only use em on night's
round up all yo cars and put you on bikes
im verbally evictin you to far away heights
and son all i need is my mic's
fuck you and yo dick eatin crew
id go through y'all like kung fu
bitch ass front...nigga stay true
yea nigga watchu gon do?
now that ive kicked you, and spat at you
and tore your limbs off and only left a few
u aint gone do shit thats right
cos all your rhymes and beats bite!
now lemme add a couple mo to send u to sleep
ive won before youve started so dont try to creep
my rhymes is rugged...and my history runs deep
soon ill be droppin my very own LP
and bitch itll make you believe
itll shock you and make you percieve
shit that aint real so get on ya knees
and get some new rhymes and suck DEEZ

peace
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Re: im bored, plz rate this rhyme outta 10
« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2001, 08:57:36 PM »
ha that shit was dope hommie... 8/10
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Re: im bored, plz rate this rhyme outta 10
« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2001, 09:58:16 PM »
The first line got me like "whoa!"LOL
8/10.
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Re: im bored, plz rate this rhyme outta 10
« Reply #3 on: July 19, 2001, 08:29:33 PM »
Nice....8/10...
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Re: im bored, plz rate this rhyme outta 10
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2001, 11:57:48 PM »
yeah tight ass rhyme. I give ya 9/10.
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