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Come And Visit The Wonders Of N-Imy (First Rap)

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.:N-Imy:.:
Verse 1:

We got the right people  /  Who think they bright people
They always boasting  /  Think they're coasting
It's like they got a clause  /  When they get it right, you applause
Always taking caution  /  Tired out with exhaustion
On a secret mission  /  To rise in position
Standing on their own two feet for this nation  /  With them it's always a race to the station
With them you cannot demoralise  /  With them, do that, and have to apologise
It's like an android heading straight for you  /  Get annoyed cause they got a whole new crew
With the right people you just wanna strangle  /  Shoot at them from every possible angle
Do not judge them they are never wrong  /  You'll never see them outside wearing a thong
When they speak they tend to stutter  /  Always getting your things in a clutter
They always catch you when trying to avoid  /  Begging someone will make them unemployed
The right people always giving you a headache  / The right people always keeping you awake
The jibberish they speak, you cannot believe  /  When they disappear, it's a sigh of relieve
Thinking their brains are fully complete  /  Thinking there brains someone please delete
It's like they get together and plot this scheme  /  Always on your mind, even in your dream
You be plotting to eliminate the numbers  /  You be plotting to decintagrate numbers
They come together like a collab  /  Stick these stupid fuckers in "get a life" rehab

Verse 2:

You got the wrong people who like to mutter  /  Shout at them and they think you a nutter
With them you can always undermine  /  Cause they do not reply, not even decline
They don't give a fuck if they aren't right  /  Rather be on the toilet getting a shite
Doing anything for a measely one buck  /  Do it with the nice ladies, you'll get a fuck
Get an answer right, shivers go down your spine  /  Used to them getting it wrong, they not so devine
They ain't got agility  /  Ain't got ability
Never take advantage  /  You can do some damage
Never a dull moment, always satisfaction  /  One moves and it sets off a chain reaction
They never need any heavy protection  /  Cause to the people they are a rejection
Never ask a question, got no solution  /  Instead they just more shit and pollution
All day they will be a servant or slave  /  Cause just once attention they crave
When you tell them that they have no power  /  They just say "fuck you" and take a shower
Never the that bit lighter than gravity  /  Never in court pleading with the judge insanity
Needing glasses to see things in their focus  /  Can't do a job, they just fucking hopeless
They will get caught making a mistake  /  Having to take all the bosses verbal intake
Always having to take notes in their jotter  /  It's almost like they are a brainstorm plotter

Verse 3:

Finally we got the normal people like me  /  Don't give a fuck about wot they see
Who cares cause we are going to be bigger  /  Watching you from the office window in your digger
We do summin wrong we don't plead  /  We get up and go to get food in which to feed
You can throw them in an adder snake pit  /  And they be life "So Fuck" instead of "Ah Sit"
To them you are the princess and thee the king  /  Don't give a fuck if we can't sing
Still do it but who cares  /  Exactly cause no-one else dares
Them it's not "Another day I have to survive"  /  But more like "Another day I am alive"
Unlike me they don't have to rap and rhyme  /  To get by another day, making a few dimes
When and how we choose to be profound  /  You'll know cause it'll make you curl up and hit the ground
Please don't even try to patronize us  /  Please don't even fucking try to summarize us
Not bringing us down but that don't stop you trying  /  Instead of us you make yourself start crying
Before you know it we could be in the west wing  /  In a janitor's closet, fucking someone, having a fling
Feel the temperature outside, it's getting colder  /  You don't realize but the normal people are getting bolder
Friendship bracelets, we don't wear no bangles  /  Not wanting to end up in unecessary tangles

It's a bit long but who cares. Ya'll wanna give me feedback.............or not.

.:N-Imy:.:
C'mon any1 wanna give me feedback here. It is my first rap, PPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEE ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Sikotic™:
Thats damn good for your first rhyme.

So Much Style:
thats not his first rhyme, its his first song i guess, cause i battled you before..

umm the lyrics are good but you have a :
AA BB CC DD EE FF  rhyme scheme the whole way thru, if you dont konw what that means its like cuplets going

thats a cat/
its fat/
and thats a dog/
in the fog

.:N-Imy:.:
I know I used the AA, BB, CC etc thing the way through because I like working that way, I think it sounds better on raps and i's just also cause I've worked that way with raps on previous sites.

But So_Much_Style this is my first rap cause I ain't never battled you before cause I don't usually ever come in the freestyle section. To be truthful this actually a song of mine. It ain't been recorded.......yet. I have a beat and the lyrics have been put on to go with the beat that's why the verse thing is in there.

Anyway thanx for the feedback ya'll.

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