New to the rap game... feedback wanted!!

[Priority]

COMPILATION
M.C. Lunaci / Priority
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M.C. Lunaci:
- Now sit and watch, as the battle unfolds
- I spit acid words as they fill ur body with holes
- This is how the tale will be told
- I came out on top, you went down cold
- This crazy foo Priority I mob wit
- Fuck wit me or him, u all will get pistol whipped
- While your bitch slobs my dick
- Just the sight of you makes me sick
- You hear me comin', yelling my battle cry
- "Die you bitch, die"
- My black steel will turn ur vital sign into a straight line
- Now let me compose
- From the ashes of hell I rose
- My anger it grows
- Fuck wit me bitch, ur insides I will expose
- This shit me and Priority drop
- Can't be stopped
- It's like the sound my pistol pops
- M.C. Lunaci is the best there be
- Now my homie will let u see
- Spit acid my foo, Priority

Priority:

- Big-ups to M.C. Lunaci
- Fuck with him ur fuckin' wit me
- Excuse me did I hear my name?
- Nah bitch didn't think so, now let me cop ur fame
- Bithces always messin' to much
- Thinkin' I won't do a thing
- What you don't know, I'm plottin' 24/7
- Ready to take ya ass up to the heavens
- Ready to swipe ya
- Cut you from ear to ear
- Look into ur eyes, yeah I see the fear
- All u bitches try to battle me
- You must be crazy
- Oh wait that's me and M.C. Lunaci
- Your minds gettin' hazy, ur lossin' sight
- I know you are, I just fucked ur wife
- Busted it twice
- Damn foo you got some lice
- You need to comb that nappy shit
- Your throat I'll slit
- That's how I use an afro pick
- I'll striaght bomb on ya
- Then snatch the phone from ya
- Call my nigga Lunaci
- Talkin' bout we got some shit to handle, this bitch tryin' to scandle

M.C. Lunaci

- Who the fuck are these faggots
- I'll break there fuckin' habitz
- I'll blow there bodys to fragments
- You can't get by me
- M.C. Lunaci, and my nigga Priority
- I ain't black, white OR asian
- I'm a demon
- Sneakin' up behind u bitches, schemin'
- Red eyes gleamin'
- Waitin' to jump on ya ass from the cielin'
- Listen to the happy sounds of people screamin'
- As I digest these souls I be stealin'
- I'm the site of death with the pale horse
- I show no emotion
- I have no remorse
- Pull a 9 from my jacket, make ur body a corpse
- Damn Priority these foos already dead
- It ain't just me whos fucked up in the head

Priority:

- Fuck Lunaci maybe this shit ain't all that
- Those niggas didn't deserve to get jacked
- As I look at there lifeless bodies
- Thinkin' damn, what did I do?
- Oh well fuck it
- I'm a crazy white dude, comin' out swingin'
- Make ur fuckin' head start ringin'
- You bitches thought you were heroes
- Now look whos been reduced to zeros
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So guys what u think of it? Me and my friend M.C. Lunaci thought of... Feedback wanted, and appreciated, thanks!

[maxi-padz]

iz tyte
could be better
but i couldn do better
peace
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[R-CEE]

MAXI PADDY BLACK CADDY MACK DADDY
u can do better that that.
ive seen it