First song...Come with a chrous

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I took my 3 freestyles that I wrote, minimized them to only the best lines, and made it into a song with no chorus, so here it is:


(Verse 1)

Well, it's NIK back in ya face/
Breakin ya back/
Puttin ya back, back in a brace/
I'm back now/
Bodyslammin pussy's like The Rock on Smackdown/
Ya'll betta' back down/
I'll hit you with a million lines/
At the same time while I spray my nine/
It's quite simple/
You just get beat like insturmentals/
When you see My homies rollin' doin Drive-bye's in limo's/
My rhymes stay tight, yours stay borin'/
You stay on 0, while I keep scorin'/
Your bitch hates ya guts, me she's adorin'/
I’ll bang you with my heat/
Ground you like cleet's/
There aint no beat/
You're just up for defeate/
With an acappella/

You aint nutthin but a failya’ (Failure)/
And that’s what I’ma tell ya/
This might be whack, but it's my first ever rhyme/
And it might be tight, cuz I used my mind/


(Verse 2)
Da da da da da..I've heard enough shit/
Da da da da da..So now let me spit/
and split/
your head open/
like an orange/
Cuz when this kid rhyme's, he never comes off borin/
Like Bizarre, I'm Bizzare/
I'll run you over with a car/
Why’s peep’s afraid to fart?/
It makes tha room stink like shit/
like ya rhyme's, Fake Muthafonkers make me sick/
Rhymin Nigga, Bigga, Trigga about 20 times /
Tryna rhyme words like size and nine/
Kid, that don't rhyme/
Now no offence to you/
But you got done by a Jew/
And who knows what I'll say by the time I'm through/
With these bars/
U can't play ya cards/
Cuz I'm so spactacula'/
Now I'm done, so I'ma throw it back to ya/
What you got up yo sleave?/
Make it better than the last one...Please!/


(Verse 3)
If I join ya team/
It will be supreme/
Like the Hustle/
I'll break ya muscle/
So don't fuck with me/
I'm blazin like weed/
One of the greatest indeed/
I wont even let ya breathe/
Cuz ya breath smell like feet/
I know I’m damn good/
Cuz I'm fuckin you up in my childhood/
Like that guard did to Bow Wow/
He got butt-fucked I hope he aint proud now/
Then he told Jermaine/
And started to complain/
Then he turned him around and did the same thang/
Got his ass eaten out like a chicken wang/
Doing it wild/
Doggystyle/
Body Gaurd, Limo Driver, and JD all piled!/
He starts to cry, swift constant motion/
He begs to stop/
Then J.E. brings the lotion/
Starting some horny ass comotion/
Running their train into the tunnel like a locomototive/
Now it's time for me to go/
I'm 13, ridin' solo/
You feelin this shit? Reply yes or no/


Know you have to come up with the hook and I'll chose the best one. Who ever I chose get's to be the Hookmaster...Any ideas for a hook...?


Last modification: Now_I_Know - 04/09/01 at 05:46:07

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

And you can even throw in a last verse since it's so short! to make ita  complete song, but i chose who's is the best, and who get's to complete the song...

Last modification: Now_I_Know - 04/09/01 at 03:04:40

[Now_Im_Not_Banned]

I just wrote a last verse....If you can think of a better one I'll use yours... but until somone write down the chorus and the last verse for this, here it is


You're 13 too, ya just afraid to admit it/
I can think of betta rhymes while I'm shittin/
Don't take it so personaly, this is lyrical combat/
We gotta diss eachother, but only I'm phat/
You suck! thats a fact/
I don't give a fuck what you say, I'll neva take that back/
you aint a real mack/
like 10/
You betta give the mic up when.../
You cant think of shit to say/
And rhyme the same things every single day/
Who gives two fucks if I'm young?/
You still can't rap like me cuz I'm The Top Gun/
Like Tom Cruise/
You'll get bruised/
When you hear me spit/
Cuz I'm as a hard as a duece duece/
When you get hit/
With my dope ass lyrics/
I'm hearin 2Pacs spirit/
Tellin me to flow on/
But 2Pac is wrong/
Cuz I dissed you bad enough/
I can easily blow you out, with just one puff/