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Vanessa:

all day i'm busy shooting people in tha head/
doesn't matter who they are, it only matters that their dead/
my momma couldn't raise me so i ended up in jail/
my lovar had no money so my daddy paid my bail/
my sista is a little ho, my brotha is her pimp/
all the homies always teased him caus they thought he was a wimp/
but now all growen up and 26 yrs old/
he's fucked up in his head and that's my mommas fault/
during he pregnancy she used drugs and alcohol/
she was all high up in heaven on my daddys funural/
thought she would lose her pain by drinking liquor and using speed/
in our garden we don't have flowers, we have some mothafucking weed/
now my sista she has aids she's been fucked without any protection/
well this is what it's come to and still it has no affection/
on me i'm just doing what i gotta/
i'm shooting people last night i almost shot my brotha/
he was playing with my knife/
i almost took him from his life/
and still it doesn't scare me that's just my motha fucking LIFE/

V

Vanessa:
some replies would be nice..

any critics are welcome............

V

maxi-paddy:
v u know me from the dre forum
thats good
but everyone from their nows ur rap is total opposite from how u know
still thas good
but u dont have to rap gangsta or come across hard to be good.
anyways peace im gonna drop a freestyle now
peace

maxi-paddy:
v tha wanne be gangsta/
tryin hard to come across as a thugsta/
stop trying so hard to be tough/
everyone knows that ur not rough/
it looks like ur freestylin has got better/
but if u wanna be wanna be gangsta everyone just let her/
but if u try and bust at me/
ill get down on one knee/
pull tha trigga/
then ull just be another dead or crippled nigga/
caus if u fuck with me i wont shoot u in tha head/
ill shoot ur in the back/
make ur back crack/
then laugh about u on my next track/
but v u know ill look out for u/
but u dont have to scream fuck a bitch to be coo/
sometimes people who do that end up lookin tha foo/
but if u wanna trip ill take out ur whole muthafucken crew/
wont stop until i kill u to/
ill sweat u like tha flu/
thats how i am/
if u fuck with me the whole neighbourhood will be hearin..
BLAM BLAM BLAM.

haha v peace out girl

Vanessa:
why does everyone say that?
i mean... that's just the way i rhyme..
i am no thug and i am no gangsta..
and i certainly don't wanna be!

but that's just the way i rap, and if you think it's crap don't look at it!

V

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