a short rhyme wat do u think?

[Still Smokin]

Im chillin wit my homies
We smokin on some rollies
We straight bangin, corner hangin
dope slangin! I start wit yo brotha
then yo motha, as i begin to smotha
yo whole fami-l-y
cause dats da way i like 2 be
cause dis be da J to tha D
bringin it from da H-P-T!
Aint nuthin but da criminal in me, ya see?
U think u can out smoke da JD?
No way i never stop smoking da chronic
Da super sonic
Itz da herb, dat makes me think of my next verb
As i spit another word
My rhymes become twisted
As my name becomes in listed
as a soldier
i thought i told ya!
peace JD

[RC]

COOL,,,,ALTHOUGH I WOULD LIKIE TO SEE U SMOKE OUT ME,,,IM THE R TO THE C,,ALTHOUGH I HAVENT SMOKED IN 12 WEEKS,,,,,ILL STILL COMPETE,,,WELL AFTER 48 MO WEEKS...