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Fatal vs. M Dogg.... take 2

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M Dogg™:
OK, rules,
first to 5 votes, 3-0 is a K.O.
Crew votes are cool if explained
15-20 bars

Click on your heels and wish to go home,  I'll still beat you in any board you go/
This man ain't lost and already cried, this is a board of G'z not peoples that dramatized/
Kids trying to come against me like they high rappers, fuck raps I'm the gun clapper/
This guy crys like a bitch so I gotta slap her, Fuck boards I be the Universe Master.../ (Masters of the Universe)
like He-Man, or Professor X the mind tapper, control you to make your rhymes laughter/
Leave you behind in the great rapture, so that Babolyan can pick you up in there capture/
Make you freeze up like a Herward Packard, like Sub-Zero one punch and you shatter/
Call me McDonalds 'cause I'm over a trillion served, and like a Explorar you can't take a swerve/
Bitch MC's got the nerve, 35-4 ain't shit when you step into the real rhymesayer world/
Like little tricks you get sick with dick, And it ain't mine, it Eminem's 'cause you TRL clits/
Like Dre and Cube I'm a Natural Born Killa, only I'm more like Hannibal 'cause I eats your liver/
I'm the one that's Fatal 'cause your blood is a river, making the snow red in December/
You got to use lyrical martal art against me, 'cause how many other forums have you bootlegged G/ (fucken biter)
Just remember this be I.E. for the rest of me, be the top rhymer of two centries/
See I'm the Angel Michael who defeated Satan, and now this board is safe for civilazation/
That was my rhyme enough with procrastiantion, now Fatal step up and teach me a lession/

I'm begging you kid. Pleace bring your shit, 35-4 on DPG, but you best ain't close to our best, so what's that mean to me.

Fatal619:
nah playa rule was no crew votes

Fatal619:
I'm ~HOLDIN MY REPUTATION~ Longer than you ~HOLDIN YA DICK~
~UNLIKE YA DICK~ my Lyrics are a ~SUREFIRE SPIT~
I'll Leave u Torn, Demented, Battered and Bruised
you couldn't ~SEE ME~ if you had ~PERFECT OPTICAL USE~.
My lyrics is too ~Phat~, they gotta ~Put Tha Hot Dogg Down~
Don't fuck with me son, or I'll expose that your a faggot ~Rockin an Evening Gown~
When u gonna learn son? you can't go to ~JENNY CRAIG~, u ain't ~PHAT~ enough
you couldn't ~BEAT ME~ if I was in ~RODNEY KINGZ HANDCUFFS~
I'll give u that we're ~IN THE SAME CLASS~ but u  ~SIT IN A DESK~
While I  ~WRITE LESSONS ON THE BOARD~, U PREPARE FOR THA TEST
U tha dumbshit that hacked the website to buy u more time
But u couldn't win if I only posted One Bar with No Rhyme
~ALICIA~ couldn't give u tha ~KEYS~ to ~LOCK~ this battle
So Brush off kid, u can't ~Grasp~ me like a ~PITCHER THAT HAS NO HANDLE~
M Dogg tha ~LOST ANGEL~
U aint' LOST, God just didn't want u so he shited u out his Anal
FLUSHED u, And u still ~AIN'T THA SHIT!~
How is it u got ~DICKRYDERZ~ with an ~IMPOTENT DICK~????
With this I leave u, Agonizing in your own Torment
Lesson 1 taught, Lesson learned,  Free of charge and No dollars spent..............


there u go playa peep tha lessons.........

one.

M Dogg™:

--- Quote ---nah playa rule was no crew votes
--- End quote ---


Fair enough, no crew votes

ToNe1904:
good battle yall..

first off, i couldnt tell whether Fatal619 wrote off of M-Doggz verse (wit that "lesson" shit). So since i cant be SURE, i wont hold it against him in tha voting.

As for tha verses...

M-Dogg, pretty tight verse. Good use of metaphors, more then im used to from u. U had good flow like usual, and a few good personals. Typical M-Dogg style, ol school attacking shit wit hard punches. Woulda liked even more personals tho, u had a good verse...ive seen better, but still a pretty tight verse man.

Fatal619, also a pretty good verse. i read tha first 2 bars, and thought this was gonna be another //"~decorated~"~\\ verse wit no content lol. But u came back thru tha middle and end of yur verse much stronger. U had sum good metas. Not too many personals, but u had tha better wordplay of tha 2 verses. Also a few tight punches in there. Good shit.

this shit was really close yall, wit 2 completely different stylez. Honestly, id say this is as close to a draw as possible IMO, but i dont like giving draw votes. So, jus barely....i give it to Fatal619

vote-Fatal619

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