Da Notorious Mack---vs ONETIME-BATTLE2[START VOTin

[PakiGangsta]

RULEZ
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First to 7 wins
No K-Os
No crew votes
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DA NOT. MACK
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Bitches u think Onetime is "cool", step a little closa to dis ~"heater"~//  
I smak Pillow wit "lefts" cuz he ain't seeing ~"right"-neither~//  
Even If our raps "joined in matrimony" he couldn't win if i gave him a ~"wifebeater"~//  
A good match between me & Onetime? by that mirage i'm ~appalled~//  
he could stand "next 2 me" wit a "cellphone" & it still wouldn't be a "~close-call~"//  
My verses fuck up ya ~memory~, u want ~publicity~??, aight Tajint ill put u in da ~obituary~//  
The way it feels to beat me, ya "ass" will neva ~know~//  
Onetime couldn't "gas" me if his family name was ~"Amaco"~!!//  
Elite you wanna get hostile? Well u just stepped into a whole new ~environment~//  
Go head, grab ya 9, i do like "Mike" & bring my 45 outta ~retirement~//  
Steppin to da K.I.N.G.S, I spit words that'll ~give you scars~//  
I Bo be "punchin", but like you "typin passwords" you only ~seein "stars"//  
My two verses is "Ether" AND ~"The Takeova"~, Ima send yo shit to "Jenny Jones" cuz its in need of a ~"Makeova"~//  
Afta ~jus a few~ mo bars, da only memories of Outlawz left inside of a ~picture-frame~//  
Ya see ~no 2~ of ma verses is eva alike, see now Ill drop it movie time; ~frame 2 frame~//  
What Lies Beneath my rhyme pattern is Hairy(Harri)-Son//  
It'll destroy ya FORwarD motion quicker than da impact of a crash from ~Air Force One~




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ONETIME
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yo, MACK, its the CHAMP entering, get ready 4 PRIME~TIME/
kaz its 1time here to smack  u and ur PUSSY kru, its time to pay down ur FINE  
lyrical performance enhanced, stuck in defeat, why~dance? is it by~chance that you'll win this battle by~trance because MAK is a wack emcee I snooze~on, leave 'em off-balance wondering where they got their booze~from  
ONETIME is too~strong, now your crew's~gone...alone~in~the~streets, telephone~your~peeps while they're home~in~their~sleep, give them word that their son got boned~in~the~cheeks and hangs with~the~freaks given the nickname 'San Francisco's~treat'  
I don't get down like~that, prior to contact, ONETIME will fight~back and will kill for the tight~crack its a known fact that ONETIME can spit a nice~track and leave the audience scratching their heads like afros heavily infested with lice~sacs, MACK left in ice~packs of deep body contusions, 'black and blue' paint the portrait of a man who's used to~losin, lyrical fusion of energized fists ready for deep bruisin through~confusion  
ONETIME's imagery of explicit~, both skillz combined u'll be torn in pieces~ graphics mixed with vivid~tactics has this midget doing wicked~backflips like wizards performing magic~with~acrobatics, psycho~pathic the Gangsta quenches his thirst with shots of jack mixed with chloric~acid in 12~ounce~glasses just to get tipsy, vaporize this element and allow the air to get~misty, fourth amendment rights, I know this gay rapper MACK wants to frisk~me, toss 'em both like fris~bees, bet~fifties, gambling against the Gangsta is like cats who used up eight lives, it gets~risky and you aint ready for this type of business, go the distance? my lyrical fit~ness is 'unseen' like no 'eye' wit~ness, ONETIME's quick~ness compared to lit~mus turns the 'basic' into a formula of liquid that can put holes in civics, examine genetics like sickle-cell~sickness, 'ill' punches that penetrate MAK no matter the thick~ness and you'll agree that this verbal~chemist is the mastermind, constructing blueprints and patterns like para~digms, stand clear~of~the~mines when it detonates and the sound waves resonates for the  
'deaf' to hear~the~rhymes, I got the sun scared~to~shine, put 'splinters' underneath your seat as you~ride~the~pine, my vicious lyrics tends to leave MAK 'loose' like taebo~bends, dollars to pounds to yens, i'm jus an OUTLAW, jus another MC writin down rhymes with my ILL pen.............

[PakiGangsta]

UPPIN fo VOTES

['Illicit']

yo, this is a close call cuz Mack brought this dope style to the table he used against me too, and Onetime was spitten a very similar style, both kept on using it throughout their rhyme, which on both sides made it a lil boring since its a long rhyme but each one of you had killer lines such as:

Mack:

A good match between me & Onetime? by that mirage i'm ~appalled~//  
he could stand "next 2 me" wit a "cellphone" & it still wouldn't be a "~close-call~"//  

Onetime:

alone~in~the~streets, telephone~your~peeps while they're home~in~their~sleep, give them word that their son got boned~in~the~cheeks

both skillz combined u'll be torn in pieces~ graphics mixed with vivid~tactics has this midget doing wicked~backflips like wizards performing magic~with~acrobatics, psycho~pathic the Gangsta quenches his thirst with shots of jack mixed with chloric~acid in 12~ounce~glasses just to get tipsy,

i loved these two.

but overall I must say, that Onetime dropped his game more consistently than Mack who I have the feelin fell off one or two times, which gives Onetime the advantage here imo.

Mack: 4.0
Onetime: 4.4

vote: Onetime

[Pillow]

well there aint no crew votes so obviouly my vote dont count but just to put my 2 cents in i gotta say onetime took this shit. mack ur shit was pretty tite as well but onetime had a better overall flow then u did and his shit hit harder. keep it one...happy ta have u as part as my krew