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WCC Cup Final Four - Da_Notorious_Mack vs. ToNe

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Hittman:
ToNe1904 ripped it up.

M Dogg™:
Was Prophit reading the same battle I was? Now I'm not going to say that Mack won, or ToNe won yet right now, but Mack had a very nice verse. On to the judging.

This right here is classic material. ToNe, you always get in these battles. Anyways, Mack came with a very lyrical, and very hard diss. It's that kinda shit you can't sweep under a rug, ya' know. ToNe had a very cool keystyle, and I like the little story telling at the end, that kin of shit keeps me interested. LOL. Anyways, both verses are really nice, but it seems ToNe had a slight advantage going second, and he took advantage of that. Now in neither rhyme does a really weakness show up. Though in Mack's since it was so long, some of the rhymes were like feeler rhymes, or just there to be there. That's alright, as a nice rhyme scheme seemed to help you. ToNe had a great story, and worked everything well. Plus in the middle of the first verse, Mack you slipped. I don't know. "Put ur head down my lap of luxury for a mouthful of  family jewels" Humm... but at the end of it all I think that your 2nd verse helped out alot, and ToNe using the spitting 2nd kind of hurt him in terms of what to write, so barely, just barely, I just this to Mack.

ToNe1904:

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Tone,you say  i never aimed a single punche at ya,here's some of the obivious 1's


By this i mean it seems most of k.i.n.g.s are recording properly with record labels while u still here




Self explanatory!



Tellin m dogg not 2 bother readin the verses



u seem 2 think u rule shit


If you want ill redo my verse with more personal disses,i didnt know u wanted it like that!

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lol first off, none of those are personal disses....until u interpret them tha way u want to. Anybody can add somebodys name to a verse. Now, wit that said man...dont trip...it was jussa verse. I aint comin out here callin a biter man, itz jussa battle. Ill holla atcha on aim. Peace

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