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WCC Cup round 2 - bLaDe vs. Da Notorious Mack

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bLaDe:
]~A Game Of Chess~[

Stepping on the battle field, the sky turns pitch black~/
Formation of clouds. thundering sounds, time to attack~/
I strike first with lightning bolts flingin like Zeus~/
ring of fire surrounds mack, squeezes tighter forming a flaming noose~/
leave mack cougin and weezing, chest squeezing, like hes got asthama~/
Label my rhymes tha  fourth state of matter, flow like liqed, yet "solid" jus call me "plasma"~/

Mist covers the battle ground, as macks soul rebounds on tha walls of the lyrical chessboard~/
Mack, a manuplated pawn, slicin his soul wid a liqed sword, soul screamin out like a broken record, higher than any vocal cord~/

bLaDe, the KING, sending out the KNIGHT of darkness to conqer the midget pawn~/
Pure evil manifested in a chesspiece, mack will regret the day he was ever born~/

You Will....
L for the agile way the KNIGHT hunts down and kills its prey~/
O for the obsticles it surpasses to bring mack to his grave~/
S for how the KNIGHT "slides" across the board in a lethal display~/
E for the Element of suprise the KNIGHT brings with Mack's DoOmsDay~/

Da Notorious Mack gets thrown off the chessboard into eternal darkness~/
sadistic manuplation like I was possesed, like middle eastern countires mack gets opressed~/
As macks soul turns cold like the north pole and slips into the afterlife~/
The battlefield is overcome by the devils night, the pain still remains sharp as a knife~/
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]~Checkmate...~[

R.I.P'ped...


 -{bLaDe}

M Dogg™:

--- Quote ---SHIT!

Da Notorious Mack lives!

honestly yo, Blade, you're my brother but FUCK! that was some fine story telling Mack...i was feeling every last word...

Mouse
--- End quote ---


Man, you ain't suppose to spoil the results. Alright, bLaDe is the WCC Heavyweight Champ, and his defended that title twice as a great rhymer. In many ways, this does affect many votes, as the judges like to give the champ extra points and what not to make it harder for the challenger to win. Well, in this case, Mack was just that much better. bLaDe, I liked your chess consept alot, and you made great use for it, but it's like Mack was painting a picture, I could see everything. Mack almost won 'cause of DQ, but that's no way to win a match, so in far compation, Mack wins with a great rhyme, nice story, and old school hardness.

Vote = Da Notorious Mack

bLaDe:
coo...congrats mack, guess you deserved it..good luck in the next battle

 -{bLaDe}

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