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Explicit vs. Illicit VOTES!!!!!

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'Illicit':
I will spit a verse, whoever replies and says they'll battle me, will have to spit one verse, and then people will vote, the person who gets three votes first, WINS..!

Here goes:


No cure for your disease. no medicene or remedies//
Get identified as an alien from Roswell Conspiracies//
Explicit to tha ends of time, can't find no one better to abolish my rhymes// Your attitude, is poor, and your angelic//
Your looks are congeiled, like an old rectified relic// Collectable thoughts of unmissable dismay// Re-arrange the past into a complete transformed future, where night stays today// Your so indecisive, your re-encarnated with a formidable resemblance to a jedi knight// Your so vindictive, your decivable, always looking for a fight// Durasdict my lyrics til theres nothin left to expose// Man you wouldnt eva compete with the greatest, you've froze// Time to inflict the pain on your ass// Get down on ya knees and beg, then maybe i'll pass// Your time to rhyme, neva able to shine, you'll worship me til the break o dawn, like im a fuckin shrine// Man its your time to bust, i just spit mine//

Your turn..! So who will accept the challenge..!?

Peace -- Explicit





My verse:


you had ya moment of shine, but now I've arrived//
contrive rhymes to expose each line of yours as lies//
whats the use in dissin mine, when what I speak is the truth//
now you on mute so shut the fuck up or else I'm endin ya youth//
you gon lose if you dont practice steady, mah raps is heavy//
ya tactics heady observe opponents before you step up and call yaself ready//
fuckin newbie, with you, I'll just fuckin gather some points bitch//
cant believe I took this challenge, fool you aint in the top ten list!//
terse and comprehensive so this sucka can feel my impact//
bustin this rap I see mc's flee battlefields I step up at//
hard to extract my wisdom I use to give any mc a heart-attack//
was born to rap and spit explicit wit and make you backtrack//



peace

ToNe1904:
ay this was a real close battle yall.

Explicit, u had very good vocab and were at a disadvantage by spitting first, without knowin yur opponent. Your verses flow was a bit off tho. But overall a pretty good verse homie.

Illicit, like Explicit u had sum good vocab. His was just slightly better. Your verse had a better flow tho, and definetely attacked more. Him spittin first made this shit real close.

Overall, Illicits attacking style pushed him over the top. Close battle tho yall...good shit.

Vote-Illicit

KVB:
Illicit had a much better flow than Explicit, I was also feeling his lyrics/volabulary more. Explicit didn't damage his opponent much with his verse. My vote goes to Illicit, simply for spitting a better verse.

Peace

Tha Muthafuckin Don - Explicit:
One more vote left in it, then if Illicit gets it, im outta here, lol, if i dom, that'll be the day..!

Thanks for all tha comments..! Peace -- Explicit..!
:)

'Illicit':
aw, dont leave homie, you definately got skills, better than sum peops here. lol explicit vs. illicit sounds kinda cool tho lol  anyway lol

im out

peace

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