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KVB vs. TinMan - -----VOTES-----
KVB:
--- Quote ---there really is nothing to agree on. he set the rules, he broke his own shit, so it dont count, hands down. 2-1 ^^
--- End quote ---
whatever bitch... 2-2 then
SCY:
alrite u 2 calm down
I TO DA GEEZY:
TinMan"z shit looks like a first draft of a battle rhyme...there r some nice ideas reflected like some nice punches and flowes, but the structure is very,very blured and some of the lines don"t even rhyme, it could"ve been better but there might be a hidden potensial in it.
KVB"z waz not only complex and poetic, his rhyming structure was much better crafted, there was proper use of the internal rhyme-in-rhyme tactic... the only flaw is tha usual one in overlly poetic battle rhymes and it"z the thematic focus,but other than that itz an excelent rhyme...
this one belongs by far to KVB.
vote: KVB
KVB:
Thanks for voting I GEEZY...
3-2, keep voting.
ToNe1904:
pretty close battle yall. Tin had sum pretty good punches, but lacked in his rhyming and flow. KVB's punches IMO were pretty much equal to tins. But he had a much better rhyme scheme and overall flow to his verse. The closing line had me crackin up "bizzy bone" lol good battle yall...peace
vote=KVB
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