LIGHTWEIGHT: R.E.L. Vs. Criminal_909

[Hittman]

Verses Must Be In Within The Next 4 Days. 10-15 Bars Each. Winner Goes To The Next Round. Judging Will Be Done By Me & Notorious Mack.

You Must Use These Words (Please Bold Them So I Know Where They Are):

Confused
Game
Ecstatic
Before
Sickness
Assassin
Groupie
Tatty
Internet
Source

[.:R-E-L:.]

U cant stay in my game....ur gonna b confused and jus get abused//
Say my name, and prepare to lose...be hung like a wacky tatty//
Crappy....Or more like a titty, and ur rhymes r jus flat out shitty//
R-E-L is one of tha best and tightest internet emcees//
And ur gonna get shot out like a pair of belligerent testes (testicles)//
Before u get all ecstatic//
Lil whore, raping u is gonna b my best and easiest tactic, and of course it'll b fantastic and dramatic//
Call me tha assassin...and NO i aint actin, all i bring is sickness//
Causin yah 2 throw up, ur fake disses.....pleazbaleevit//
This rhyme is yah only source of a "Great Keystyling Course"//
Best show yah remorse.....when gettin schooled//
Groupie....u betta choose me, cuz u kno u gonna lose 2 me//
Fools....break 2 me, and shake 2 me//......AND UR ONE OF THEM!

[Cliftone_Santiago_909]

You're confused in tha game, tryna get at me/
14 years old, on tha Internet lookin up porn, with a face full of acne/
You'z a -Retarded: Example: of a Lyricist-/
Speach Impediment, cuz of tha Brain Sicness/
When I leave you unsupervised, Your Moms gets mad at me/
But I treat you like a son, even let you call me Daddy/
Or better yet Tatty/
Your Moms? Just a Groupie that I met Before/
Let me Hit when I lied and told her I was on The Source/
You left out tha A becuz you aint REaL/
Actin all ecstatic and crazy like you was high off speed pills/
but try to calm down.. stop tha Hyper Ventiliztion/
Nothin new here... just anotha Sucka MC Assassination




Crazy.. I didnt even know these started already. What day is this? I just spit tonight cuz I didnt know how far behind I was. Kinda rushed...



"Tatty".. becuz of his Speech Impediment.
-R:E:L-... Retarded Example Of A Lyricist
REL... Real without tha A

[Hittman]

R.E.L: I Think Your Whole Rhyme Scheme Needs To Be Improved Slightly. Its Always Got A Nice Flow But It Doesnt Seem To Be Right. I Wont Diss You But The Verse Was Nothing But Average. - 3/5

Criminal_909: Your Worse Point Was When Trying To Get The Word Tatty Into Your Rhyme, But Other Then That I Was Impressed With What You Pulled Out - Especially At The Start Of Your Rhyme When You Hit Home With Them Personals. I Feel You More Then Deserved The Victory. - 4.3/5

[da_notorious_mack]

REL:now imma be real,ive seen betta from u,tha testes line was alrite,none of your punches were really damagin,maybe if youd been against sum1 weaker (cough*doggy*) this verse would have seen u thru ,but criminal came hard.3.8

Criminal:Yo this shit was blazin dawg,only problem is likelogic said was tryin 2 use tha word tatty,but i liked tha flow 4.4

[Hittman]

Harmany - 6.8/10

Criminal_909 - 8.7/10

Criminal Goes Through To The Next Round.

[Entreri117]

Harmany - 6.8/10

Criminal_909 - 8.7/10

Criminal Goes Through To The Next Round.

?  Don't u mean R:E:L?  LOL

[Hittman]

?  Don't u mean R:E:L?  LOL

My Bad....!!!