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~ToNe1904 vs Kane~MIDDLEWEIGHT TITLE MATCH! VOTE!!

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'Illicit':
well, at first I was struggling cuz Kane brought tremendous heat in this one, he had sum killer lines such as:

I'll put ya in a deep sleep like all tha Z's when ya type ya S's//*
I guess KINGS got 2 bitches cuz yall both be rockin dresses//

This'll be ya last ever title defense isnt that right Tone//
Cuz its impossible to defend a title that you no longer own//


this was impressive. nice work


but overall I think I have to give it to ToNe,if Kane wouldve stayed in the game and spit more often he mighta beat him I think.

i wont quote tone's shit, too much work lol  but he was harder, and a few better punchlines. and that "dive-in-ya-mind" lines was off the heezy fa sheezy

peace

Political Gangsta:
Kane Review:

Kane may be the most formidable morality critic in this battle.  Opening up with a viscious attack seranading Tone's character with a series of lyrical artilery strikes.  Kane's artilery consists of kryptonite, clips(gun play) knife, and even his bear hands.  Kane rhymes concurrently for six bars, with clever wordplay in between.  Perhaps even more pervasively withstanding, is the savage irony and a profound deadpan humor consist throughout the middle of his verse.  Sleepin (S's) (darkness) (light).  This verse was deeply rooted in comedic fiction, however the comedy was dark enough to make the hardest wanna be thug tuck his tail.

Rating: 4.4

Tone Review:

The centralized theme of this verse, is Tone's conscious attempt to poke wholes in Kane's argument.  The gashes open up wide after the opening bar.  Tone disrespects Kane's name and thus disrespects Kane's history.  Tone continues posturing as a cultural critic, speaking to the rise in crack in the 80's in the first bar, and then on to capital punishment with the next.  Tone is a depraved sadists from ancient times, when prisons and probation never existed only capital punishment.  As the verse develops Tone's psyche becomes exposed, and the vignette is this, Tone is spittin clever bars unconnected in theme.  Callin him and Maxi retail does little in the way of strengthening Tone's left hook, and since boxing is the virility symbol of American masses, Tone's masculinity is still squandered.  Tone is clever with his metaphors and wordplay like Chino XL and Juice, but fails to sell wood with his themes and concepts.

rating: 4.2

Vote- Kane

Cliftone_Santiago_909:
Too late to post up paragraphs.. but I'ma give it to Tone..

That "High Off My Lines" line was crazy... lol.. so was that 4,5,9 thing.. that shit just did it for me.

Props to Kane too though.. he came heated. That Cripwalk/Gangsta Run line was tight. Also attacked Tone's OG CALIFORNIA image... and his KINGS Crew.. That was all good. Just felt Tone's more.

M Dogg™:

--- Quote ---Damn itz like yah stole mah name, im tha real "Caine" cus u gettin "high-off-my-lines"/

--- End quote ---


Damn... that line was hot... great opener. Kane, you can gangsta with it, and had a nice flow, but was missing something. ToNe, you came good, but some lines lacked that great killer instink. But over all, I think Kane came more considant. Kane, which makes things interesting...LOL


vote = Kane

ToNe1904:
hmmm...


2-2


keep votin yall...

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