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Scribe vs. Illicit   4/6

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bLaDe:

--- Quote ---good battle yall.

Scribes verse was pretty tight. Short, but had good flow and vocab. As well as Illicits, i think Illicit edged it out tho cus he attacked a little bit more. good battle tho.

vote=Illicit
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Yea like ToNe said...it was a tight battle, but Illicit attacked more, and sum of his bars, i was really feeling....

vote - illicit

 -{bLaDe}

NoT:
SCRIBE REVIEW
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Hmmm... I wasn't really crazy about this verse. To be honest, although it was different from most battle verses around here, it was very similar to the shit you see at other boards in every battle. A line isn't dope just because you're calling out nuclear meltdowns, telekenesis, and "psychotic heat". I know it seems harsh, because everyone else loves this verse, but I didn't notice any real wordplay here, just braggin and put-downs. It was a good verse, but you still have a lot of progressin' left to do.
Overall Rating: 3.3/5

"Knock 'Em Out" Bars
Couldn't really find any...

"Played-Out" Bars
Couldn't find anything really bad...

ILLICIT REVIEW
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Damn, man... you know I'm too tired to read all that shit. ;) Anyway, it came off as a pretty nice verse, but it wasn't without its mistakes. For one, it was a little hard to flow too. When I judge verses I always use my second read through to try and rhyme the piece and those were some really long bars. Second, it started off a little slow. You got things together as the thing went on, but you seemed to be really grasping for a hard punch in your opening and never came up with one. Overall, this piece is better than most, but far below your norm. Good piece all the same.
Overall Rating: 3.5/5

"Knock 'Em Out" Bar(s)
u read the news, I make em, you speak to nudes, I rape em/
you see the difference? u wack, im crazy, gimme a reason and get wasted/

"Played-Out" Bar(s)
born to smack, Scribe wit this mic in my hand wisdom you cant overstand/


VOTE = Illicit

'Illicit':
aight KO,  good battle,  u should spit more often dawg, ya shits tight

Scribe:
Congratulation on the KO Illicit.

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