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Dogg Jones vs. Illicit  3/6   VOTES!!!!

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'Illicit':
aight homie, I fucked up with my time limit with logic so I will give this three days, that way I know I will really make it for sure.   15 lines max, 3 = KO  first to 5   crew votes allowed

peace        

Doggystylin:
sup ceeride or what now you changed your name to illicit/
last time we had a battle i shit on you ina minute/
fuck prewrittin, im just freestylin, keystylin/
yeah homie im the one that was known as doggystylin/
they call me dogg and im about to rape my bitch,give you what you need/
lyrically fuck you,this is where my dick makes you bleed/
not on that fag shit, i attack it, outcome is drastic, rap you in plastic/
fuckin section is named after me cuz im skillmatic/
still at it, rippin hoez like you and then like dre your all about aftermathmatics/
leave you in shock like shit was some terrorist tactics/
all your allowed to call me is dogg jones,leave you lookin like a idiot aka puffy combs/
break into cribs aka homes,light it on fire like i did to ToNe's/
let me break it to ya,on wcc im the real hero/
you just talk shit, yo your nothin but a actor like robert deniro/
i thought you knew but after this you should know, that im the one they fear ho!/

'Illicit':
stop quotin my rhymes faggot , did u expect no one would notice?/
and dont even start writin some own shit cuz we all know its gon be bogus/
invade ya locus, focus and make sho this, rhyme kills ya hopes kid/
I lyrically erupt like volcanos leavin you hopeless, no time left to hit the skids/
ya wonder why Doggystylin had to change his name? simple watch me explain/
imagine a skinny muthafucka net bangin but never gettin laid/
debate all you want, ur frontin snitchin bitchin jus like a skandalous ho/
u beatin me is as hilarious as claimin you got an above-average flow/
"im tight, ur not, lets fight, no wait stop" is the shit that u drop/
homie face it you couldnt rock arenas that are as big as flowerpots/
ya think a name-change will save ya from embarassment and beatings/
I spit flames on ya bitch unhesitant to make MC's feel me/
deceive opponents with mindgames, extreme pain is what I crave/
make u my slave ur path I paved Dogg Jones gettin lowered in his own grave/
last line I made u suffer, ya moms callin for supper so bitch get back in ya cage/

+[=PHI@SK0=]+:
aite, both rhymes was tite, kinda hard decision, i was tryin to read them over listening to the TV, so it was kinda hard to keep the flow going in my head, but i gotta say Dogg Jones rhyme started off REAL dope, i was thinkin' he was gonna take it, but i donno, it kinda downspiraled as i lost interest, no offense, it was still tyte. Cee Rides was cool, nice regular start as opposed to Dogg Jones, but he kept a good flow and he kept my interest the whole way through, so my vote goes to....

VOTE: ILLICIT


good battle tho... one

TimeLock:
Dogg i liked the puffy combs bit... ;D

but CeeRide came iller...

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