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Logic vs. Illicit   2/6    VOTES!!!!!!!

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'Illicit':
damn, I'm too late, I'ma spit anyway, regard it if you like

It's simple, I bust back and fuckin slap those dimples til u acknowledge the principle/
mess wit me is a step you dont take end up a cripple, lyrically bashed and ripped you/
jus like your wack ass english football team u suck at what you do/
homie you coulnt be ill if I wrote ya rhymes for you/
fuck writin in CAPS if ya rhymes still wack, I'm slick to hit ya quick better catch me on Kodak/
cant stand a chance all eyez on me and bitch you clearly know that/
inspired by rap, but irritated by your style/
homie must be bitin cuz it sounds like mine/
actin boss in every thread threatening peops with weak shots/
board FBI or what? moderatin and tradin rhymes for cocks/


quick shit,   votes yall      

ToNe1904:
well damn yall. U guyz mussa been REALLY into this one *sarcasm* lol. j/k.

aiight...

Logic, had sum nice punches, pretty good multis (although sum were kinda funny soundin lol) Pretty simple shit, compared to what i normally see from u. But u said it was jus sum quik shit, so for that...it was a tight verse.

Illicit, like logic ive seen better from u too. U had tha harder punches of tha 2 verses. But Logic came wit a bit better flow, and was slightly more creative. U said u jus wrote yur shit up quik also...so i take that into account as well as for logics.

pretty close battle yall...

vote=Logic

peace

Scribe:
I vote for Logic, his flow was more structured and his multis were pretty tight too.

Hittman:
Thanks For Voting Scribe & ToNe1904.

2-0.... More Votes Please.

.:thE windtalkEr:.:
--------------------------logic----------------------------

well ive seen better from u.im not saying tht this is bad.
ill flow and impressive punchlines.
the overall consistency in the bars where as expected.
well written rhyme schemes.seriously awesome rhyme scheeme i guess.

memorable bars:

When I Rap The Mic Cord Round Your Throat I AIM-to-CHOKE ~
SAME-as-ROPE, Like Jack The Ripper Strangling ALL-my-VICTIMS ~


-------------------------illicit-----------------------------

pretty average shit.
would have fared better if the bars consistency was maintained.ur punchline were dope .if u had put in a little more effort in making ur ryme flow better it would have helped.
otherwise neat.but not the best from you.

memorable bars:


fuck writin in CAPS if ya rhymes still wack, I'm slick to hit ya quick better catch me on Kodak/

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VOTE=LOGIC

PZ

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