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.:R-E-L:. vs. Killuminati... *Middleweight Title Match*

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Reef:
Ok heres the breakdown.

R.E.L

Tight verse man, your improving alot, all i can say is keep spittin like that. It was a good verse, your vocab was pretty ill, apart from in the intro and the rhyme scheme could be improved a little, i got nothing against the old skool style.. But switchin some shit up sometimes would be dope. Your flow was good, the simple rhyme structure helped it flow. There wasn't very many direct disses toward Killuminati, i thought u coulda played on his name and maybe brought the pac dickrider lines in there lol. I think at the end of it all thats what lets your rhyme down, no personal disses in there.

Best Line(s):
Exploding worse than a spontaneous combustion eaten at a luncheon//
You've sucked since then, cuz I got better diction than a Literature Junction//

Killuminati

You had a dope verse homie. Your vocab was sick, and that little intro flowed and rhyme real nicely, didnt make much sense but the flow made up for that. The actual main rhyme you wrote didnt flow properly to me, but the rhymes were real dope and the punchlines in the whole verse were tight. Your wordplay was cool too, disses seemed to hit harder than R.E.L's verse.

Best Line(s):
I'm dissectin ya message,  wreckin this session, you embarassed like homosexuals in front of hoes expectin erection//


Overall this was a good battle. But the winner for me has to be Killuminati.. Good battle once again.

Peace.

Now_Im_Not_Banned:
K i l l u m i n a t i   had some dope ass multis and punches...But what I didn't like is that his bars were too long...If u tried to flow that shit over a beat, it wouldn't flow right...U (and most of the keystylers today) have to shorten your bars...Also, I didn't see too many big words in there...Most words were Elementry level words...The fact that u have dope multis doesn't mean shit when u use small words...But, it still is a dope rhyme overall...


REL's rhyme was on a higher vocabulary level, and flowed better, with shorter bars...However, ure punches and multis need to be improved...None-The-Less...My vote goes to R-E-L...PeACe

Kill:
Aight 1-1...I think the intro's vocab was aight but yeah the rest of the verse wasn't based on high vocab but on pun(che)s...whutever...more votes

Kill:
and as for the bars...many people don't seem to be able to flow my shit like this so I'll change that even though it flows greatly to me, finally it all depends on whut it's like for others

da_notorious_mack:
rel ya have improved a lot but killuminati took this,i managed ta catch how it flowed,it quite simple,he had better punches and multis as well,rel ya were lackin personals

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