Author Topic: NEED HONEST OPINIONS PLEASE..LEFTY AND DIAMONIQUE..2 VERSES IN! (Read 342 times)

LONDON!!! · « **Reply #15 on:** June 09, 2009, 06:56:03 AM »

Quote from: LOCO5150 on June 05, 2009, 01:03:35 PM

YO WEST UP! THIS LEFT DOGG...I JUST WANT TO HEAR FROM YALL AND TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK...NO RACIST REMARKS PLEASE....IM JUST GRINDIN LIKE EVERYBODY ELSE...RESPECTS!

L-DOG

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decent club tune, diamonique's got a good flow and wordplay, the other rapper represents too, he's got a good flow

KaiserSoze · « **Reply #16 on:** June 09, 2009, 07:17:06 AM »

Sup man, I would suggest that you work more on your multi-syllable rhyming to give your lyrics a more professional and dope sound. Obviously your aren't going to be writing Illmatic or Relapse or anything like that but putting a bit more work in to that side of the game would have everything sounding crisper overall I think.

Keep grindin and keep us posted.

LOCO5150 · « **Reply #17 on:** June 09, 2009, 12:12:44 PM »

FIRST I'D LIKE TO SAY THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT AND POSITIVE FEEDBACK...IT FEELS GOOD TO HEAR YOUR OPINIONS AND I WILL WORK ON THE THINGS I WAS TOLD TO DO BETTER. I KNOW I STILL GO A LOT TO WORK ON...I WILL DEFINATELY KEEP YALL UP TO DATE WITH NEW MUSIC, EVENTS AND PROJECTS THAT THE SUSPECTS ARE DOING.

P.S. NEED MORE FEEDBACK ON THE CUT PLEASE. LOL.

ROBBS WEST UP AND I KNOW KAIZER SOSE FROM MYSPACE,,WEST IT DO? KEEP IT 100 FAMILY!

LOCO5150 · « **Reply #18 on:** June 10, 2009, 09:12:24 AM »

MACADOMUSIC THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT...WE MAKIN SHIT CRACK DOGGY...CHECK OUT THE VIDEO PERFORMANCE ON THE THREADS.

Slikk_J · « **Reply #19 on:** June 12, 2009, 03:19:29 AM »

Quote from: LOCO5150 on June 07, 2009, 12:14:51 PM

EY SLIKK_J YOU CAN CHECK OUT MORE MUSICK HERE ON MY PAGE... http://HTTP://WWW.MYSPACE.COM/LEFTYKNUCKLES....AND HERES SOMETHING ELSE WE TRYIN FOR RADIO. LET ME KNOW.

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Love 2 love u - I like this. Got that dope old school bass guitar unplugged beat, wih the singing hook, female background vocals, Talkbox (Is that Fingazz once more

), good street sounding verses (without sounding over the top)...

Icy Flows And Whips - Nice grimey sounding track....this song fits your style to a T. Good street track!

Raised in the hood - I like the samples in the hook, but apart from that, doesn't appeal much to me....kinda doesn't stand out from the rest of the hood tracks...

Gangstas Menatl - Same as Raised in the hood except with a not so flash hook...is that Spider Loc in the track? But yeah not feeling it

Been so long - Apart from the singing, I like this track...unfortunately majority is singing. verse cool. Beat cool.

Westcoast Warlords - Hard gangsta posse cut. Not my taste no more, back in the days I would though, but thats just me. Def not knocking the track. It does what its suppose to do....Its Gangsta, it's hard, it represents....Everyone comes off hard.

Suspects 'Til Proven Innocent - Another street track....not bad...message is clear in the track. beat cool. Not too flash, but not bad.

Love 2 love u and Icey Flows And Whips are dope. Like them two. This dierction along with the Diamonique track means your in the right track. But overall, like 'KaiserSoze said, like to hear you working on more multi-syllable rhymes to take your game to a new level.

LOCO5150 · « **Reply #20 on:** June 13, 2009, 09:23:03 PM »

ALRIGHT IMMA GET CRACKED ON...LMAO...BUT WHAT THE FUCK IZ MULTI-SYLLABLE G? LOL......I WAS SITTIN HERE LIKE THESE FORUM PEOPLES IZ GONNA CLOWN MY ASS...YAH I LIKES THE ONE YOU LIKED AS WELL...TALKBOX WAS DONE BY KILLA-CAL AS WELL AS PRODUCTION ON THE TRACK...EDDIE CANE AND BETTY BOO DOING VOCALS ALONG WITH ME. RAISED N THE HOOD IZ TIGHT BUT I UNDERSTAND IF YOU AINT FEELING IT..

GANGSTAHS MENTAEL HAS BEEN CHANGED SLIGHTLY WITH KAYOTTIC ROCKIN THE 2ND VERSE AND NOT THE OTHER DUDE...AND YAH THATS SPIDER-LOC ON IT... ITHOUGHT YOU WOULD OF FELT THIS ONE FOR SURE...BUT ITS COOL...PRODUCTION BY KILA CAL AS WELL..

BEEN SO LONG IS ACTUALLY A NICE SONG. ANYWAYS WEST COAST WARLORDS IS REVAMPED AS WELL. BUT I APPRECIATE YOU TAKEN THE TIME TO CHECK OUT THE PAGE.