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"Evolutionary"/ New Track I'm Working On Writing... "Lucid Dreaming"

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QuietTruth:

--- Quote from: Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar on June 11, 2009, 02:28:36 AM ---Reality makes me sad see,
it's because I'm perfectionist,
so I don't want to see this
or I don't want to see that,
So I forced my mind to
face it anyway cause it's fact,
but then I feel way weak
to know the real
of mistakes I made so steep
wieght of mountains on
my shoulders,
of giult that gathers
as I grow older
Now I'm searchin
for some inspiration
So deep into my
past I'm penetrating
and the same past
that pissed me
is the same past
that lifts me
cause the things
I've seen and
learn get to me
spirit grows like a tree
the root is so deep
that I can't see
maybe someday I'll see

--- End quote ---
That's a nice verse.

Ill hook by the way.

TraceOneInfinite:

--- Quote from: QuietTruth on June 15, 2009, 11:20:43 AM ---
--- Quote from: Exit Infinite.. Enter Grammar on June 11, 2009, 02:28:36 AM ---Reality makes me sad see,
it's because I'm perfectionist,
so I don't want to see this
or I don't want to see that,
So I forced my mind to
face it anyway cause it's fact,
but then I feel way weak
to know the real
of mistakes I made so steep
wieght of mountains on
my shoulders,
of giult that gathers
as I grow older
Now I'm searchin
for some inspiration
So deep into my
past I'm penetrating
and the same past
that pissed me
is the same past
that lifts me
cause the things
I've seen and
learn get to me
spirit grows like a tree
the root is so deep
that I can't see
maybe someday I'll see

--- End quote ---
That's a nice verse.

Ill hook by the way.

--- End quote ---

Okay then.. it's ready homie if you'll do the hook for me

I'll upload the version of the song as I have it now... and then the beat by itself, and then you can apply the hook and send it to me

TraceOneInfinite:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=877388&songID=7714868

TraceOneInfinite:
So I've written a few verses up there, now I have to re-structure the rhyme scheme and consolidate it all to just 2 or 3 verses

J Bananas:
Have you been practicing lucid dreaming? Cool huh?

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