Author Topic: A verse I wrote today in college.  (Read 157 times)

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A verse I wrote today in college.
« on: October 24, 2002, 12:20:46 PM »
sick of all these people just copying me,
They succesful off of the blood that I bleed,
The tears that I cry the sleep that I miss,
When I'm workin my ass off to get shit finished,
The world is fucked up, I'm just tryin my best,
But I can't get no where without a pain in my chest,
Or a hand on my back just pullin me back,
Cos the work that I do people dont think but jack,
They stealin my shit and gaining credit,
When I'm stuck and I'm left with the rotten pieces,
Cos they rules don't apply to those that lie,
And those that dont feel or think but steal,
I'm followin rules that they breakin in 2,
I wish someone could tell me just what I can do,
Cos these fools are my friends that I love til the end,
But I'm workin so hard so I'll have money to spend,
And a job to be proud of and a house thats my own,
I'm in college for 2 years and I feel so alone,
I'm scared of failure I gotta be the best,
For 5 hours I sat an typed without a rest,
Without drinking a drink or sparing a second to think,
Looking back and dont even think that I blinked,
Cos I was focused on getting all my work completed,
But now I find out that my shits been repeated,
Thats fucked up I just feel so angry inside,
These people are my friends but would they stand by my side,
If copying my work came obvious to the teachers,
I swear I would flip if they deneyied it the bitches,
Would they say thats its mine or blaintly lie,
I swear I won't cry but its them that'll die,
I just don't know, but I tell yer its messin with my head,
As far as I am concerned they have made there bed so they can lye in it fools,
 

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Re:A verse I wrote today in college.
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2002, 12:36:41 PM »
Real tight rhyme man.. I was feelin the subject, i get the same BS at school..
 

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Re:A verse I wrote today in college.
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2002, 02:26:33 PM »
I was feelin the subject too, the rhymes weren't excitin but nice, good way of spittin on topic
 

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Re:A verse I wrote today in college.
« Reply #3 on: November 07, 2002, 08:00:54 AM »
nice topic.  cool piece.
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Re:A verse I wrote today in college.
« Reply #4 on: November 07, 2002, 04:20:17 PM »
like i have said b4, always deep, good shit man keep postin