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.:DaYg0sTyLz:.:
First two verses and chorus of a track I wrote a while back. Still needs a female to sing the chorus. Actually had the beat made for the song, but i lost that shit lol  Let me know whatcha think.

(verse1)
Just yesterday, I heard that pops passed away
Even if I was religious man, Id be the last to pray
I aint sad today, damn its sad to say
You finally cleaned up yah act, but just a tad too late
Never even got to see yah little boy become a man
Too busy in the streets, sellin dope n runnin scams
You had plenty of chances to try and keep in touch
But to pick up the phone, would just be to much
Did I see you? Fuck...naw, u was see through, phony
Invisible to me, but I believed you, homie
When yah said that yah loved me, and u said that yah cared
You wasnt proud to be a father, instead u was scared
Couldnt be a real man, so yah fled yah fears
You disappeared, and made yah message clear
So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years

(Chorus)
Sometimes in yah life u have to sacrifice
Open yah eyes and do whats right
Even if, you can hardly stand
Youve got step up and be a man

From time to time I know that life gets rough
And yah feel as though youve had enough
That doesnt mean that you turn yah back
On the ones, that need yah love

(verse2)
Sometimes in yah life you have to sacrifice
Open up yah eyes, and do whats right
Or its yo, loved ones that will pay the price
Aint got to say it twice, cus when yah death was handed
You still just the punkass that left me stranded
What good did yah do? Whos gonna save yah soul fool
Used to play it so cool, u would say yah so true
Everyday I hoped you, would start to pay yah own dues
But in the end, it was moms who had to play yah role too
A woman on her own, bein a mother and a father
Like Shaq, My Biological Didnt Bother...either
See theres...no method to the madness
Baby boy full of joy, and you swept him into sadness
Let him see who dad is, then left him as a bastard
But congratulations G, dont take me wrong
Look how yah motivated me, homie play that song!

QuietTruth:
That was good son. Some heartfelt ish.


--- Quote from: .:DaYg0sTyLz:. on September 11, 2009, 01:17:31 PM ---So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years

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That's crazy right there.



Nice.

.:DaYg0sTyLz:.:

--- Quote from: QuietTruth on September 11, 2009, 04:47:43 PM ---That was good son. Some heartfelt ish.


--- Quote from: .:DaYg0sTyLz:. on September 11, 2009, 01:17:31 PM ---So when I heard the news, you think I shed a tear?
Hell naw, in my heart you been dead for years

--- End quote ---
That's crazy right there.



Nice.

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thanks for the feedback man, props +1

QuietTruth:
Likewise!

you gon always be my latin queen bitch:
damn that was dope
im assumin that was all true?

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