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Chamillitary Click:
I'm sick-crazy, flashback to New York in the 1980's/
Insane B, serial killa who likes to rape ladies/
Waits nine months so she can make my baby/
Then stab her with the chest with the shank I made her make me/
I believe the killer went by the name The Son of Sam, right?/
Put the pieces together & see my Son is Sam, LIGHTS/
Later that night, i took the first flight to Iraq, ight?/
Left him there & continued on with life/
Don't know much about Roccy, except the fact he's cocky/
which i can't understand, because i see whose in his posse/
Stupid move to call out the Dub when it's got me/
I get that you're smokin', but watch who you're pokin'/
because there is no reason to never wake up in an ocean/
Westcoastin' for life when you're body is found in the Pacific/
mad twisted with sharks pickin' at your ribs because they smell the blood from your slit wrists/
That's the plan man, wake up the next morning & read you're arm was found at a harbor in Japan/
Keep the peace on the Dub fam or it'll be Greek Easter & the menu reads LAMB/
Then the rest is history, speakin' of which, NIK should feel blessed because if you look at his family, distantly/
he was one Holocaust kill away from not even exisitin', B/
Boy who is in love with LA's sharp-shoota, take some advice & get off your computa/
Your ex had to make an account just so she could talk to ya/
who happens to look like a thrizzed out Oompa Loompa/
Now I Know why you're so mad at the world/
I figured it out when Muhfukka posted pictures of ya girl/
Sikotic, your bitch is on the loose/
Get the leash, actually, doesn't fit, get a noose/
Tell bitch to watch it because I got Vick on speed dial too/
Queen, you wanted some? Come get it/
Call up your ghostwriter & tell him to step it up so I can respect it/
PM me & ask me to write your response/
that would make it me vs. me & that's what every true rap fan wants/
Been here for two years, still feelin' like a rookie/
but I'm still running laps around you pussies/
Don't push me.../


no disrespect, but Queen put me up to it lol.

here is the beat i was vibin' too while writing;

Okka:
Damn, that was dope homie.

J. Bryson:
hahaha nice it had a lot of dope lines..just kind of an unbalanced flow

Chamillitary Click:

--- Quote from: J. Bryson on September 15, 2009, 03:01:30 PM ---hahaha nice it had a lot of dope lines..just kind of an unbalanced flow

--- End quote ---

i highly respect any critism.

can you give a few examples of what you mean?


--- Quote from: Okka on September 15, 2009, 03:00:47 PM ---Damn, that was dope homie.

--- End quote ---

thanks homie. 8)

MoodMuzik:
very dope....shots fired at a few people that deserved some lol

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