Highway if life (give feedback)

[Pillow]

yo waz up, i havent dropped a key in a while so i thought id bless u all lol.......check it........

yeah i had a few drinks....but that aint impairing how i think//
i get caught the one night i drink n drive..damn...what a jinx
life stinks..these pigs are hot on my tail//
but im not gonna stop..i dont wanna go to jail//
i move like a snail...these cops are gaining on me//
i gotta get out the country...so to mexico i flee//
oh geeez...i hear the sirens grow louder//
my path clears as the cars in front of me scatter//
all that matters...is that my life is on the line//
one lil mistake....one petty crime//
im out of my mind...who can escape the po-po?//
im gonna be a star on the next episode of Cops the tv show//
oh no..is what i think as i look in the rear view mirror//
i notice more cars...bright lights gtting nearer//
damn i am scared..as i keep my foot on the gas//
its a hard task...thinking strait with cops on ur ass//
i am an outkast..i bet this chase is on the local news//
after this incident...i know my reps gonna be bruised//
but i didnt do much...hell i aint even drunk//
but i decided to run...o well....now im fucked//
life sucks..then i hear a loud bang from behind me//
i feel the left side of my toyota siding//
damn...thse fucks shot out one of my back tires//
my rims scraping the ground...causing lil sparks of fire//
id just ben hired...working at my new job//
theres goes that idea....as my thoughts turn into a fog//
i feel the right side drop...and hit the brakes quick//
now im done..i cant make it...i have to quit//
shit!!!....i open the door and im surronded by cops//
all pointing handguns at me...but one of em got a glock//
i look at the clock....damn its three in the morning//
i bet my wifes home in bed...tossing and turning//
shes prolly snoorin...not knowing what i just did//
hope she aint mad..hope she can explain it to the kids//
but its too late...i fucked up and now im i cuffs//
ill be in the slammer for a while...i got nothing but bad luck//
i suck...just ruined my life in less than an hour//
im gonna be in jail...getting beat and devoured//
my mouth goes sour...what the fuck did i just do//
suddenly it hits me....i get the clues//
i start to stumble over my own shoes//
i figure out im addicted to beer and booze//
im stuffed in the car...in the back seat i sit//
mad....as i depart to alcholics anonymous//

peace.......

~Blanket~

['Illicit']

well, overall a good piece. the start was kinda simplistic but still kinda fly. keep it comin homie. nice shit

peace

[@Ss@sSiN]

ya pretty hot key

[Reef]

Good storytelling piece didnt seem to dirvert from wat u were sayin much .. It was simplistic but that was cool cause the flow was tight..