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Hot new rapping and beats from me, feedback please!!

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On The Edge of Insanity:
After a long time out, I decided to record the start of a new song with me rapping, about the current state of the hiphop game. It isn't completed, but i've put up some audio of the first verse dissing Murda Inc just to get some feedback from you, cause my rapping style has changed a bit since last time you probably heard me. This can be downloaded here:

http://www.dorringtons.freeserve.co.uk/murdainc.rm

Also I have been working on some new beats recently, and a sample of three of these beats can be downloaded from:

http://www.dorringtons.freeserve.co.uk/beatstogether2.rm

Please leave feedback on these beats as well.

Thanks for your time.

//:in-DIJI-nouz..:
HAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm sorry i had to laugh tho ... i can just picture you sittin' in your room flowin' that shit into your computer, a 13 year old little teenager tryin' to act hard and gangster on the other side of the world... i can just picture him in a little british school outfit and a doorag, with a piece of paper in front of him flowin into a little ass computer mic, he actually sound like he whispering shit so no one in his house would hear him.... maybe it's cause i'm faded that i can picture that so vividly and its so hilarious to me, but regardless, its funny as hell. sorry, i hate to be a hater, but you need to take a step back and look and see where the line is between a fan and somone whose involved in the game... you got a little too carried away, stepped over the line, and tried to get involved... your better off a fan ... its aite, you just wasn't cut out for beatmaking thats all... well maybe if you try hard at that u can make some good ones, but i wouldn't count on flowin' AT ALL, not 1 percent ... hell nah, forget about that shit dogg...but like i said, i hate to be a hater, but under the circumstances of this being to damn funny and most of all the fact that i'm toked, i had to say something ... one love!

//:in-DIJI-nouz..:
its funny cuz u see that picture of that hard ass looking black dude next to his name, then you see that georgeous model all tagged to his name.. u think your getting ready to hear either some grimey ass rapper from new york or sumin' or at least some kinda baller... but nah... after considering all those facts, take another listen to his track and tell me is that not funny?

On The Edge of Insanity:
Ok man I see what you are saying, but I would just like to point some things out:

1) I'm 17, and I'm from the UK so I am obviously going to have a different accent to an American person.
2) I do have quite a whispy voice anyway, plus the fact that I was using my laptop speakers to record my vocals means that the quality makes it sound worse.
3) Perhaps I don't wanna be a grimey ass rapper from new york or a baller. You ever think of that?

bez:
I liked the beat to it man but your voice sounds to laid back for that to be a diss.  A diss needs to be ard hitting shit, u gotta be screaming shouting going mad at this record label, truth is you sound like your dissing them after you have just sent them a box of roses.  You sound to low, but never the less still good mate, the lyrics seems ok and it fitting it well with the beat lad.  Keep it up homie.

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