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westsiderider323:
i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho
low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick
yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son

Þŕiņçë:

--- Quote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on December 14, 2009, 11:28:46 AM ---i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho
low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick
yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son




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i put in bold stuff that didnt really make sense to me. i mean i got what u were tryna say but i dont think those were even words haha.

i underlined the parts the i liked or thought was good. overall it seemed like a good warmup rap

westsiderider323:

--- Quote from: ¥øûήg Þ®iñ¢€  ™ on December 15, 2009, 11:10:06 AM ---
--- Quote from: Blunt Tyme [MC Big iLL] on December 14, 2009, 11:28:46 AM ---i spit phenomenal
say u better? yall comical
yall cant reach me look up im astronomical
tropical storm force flow
throw ya corpse tho
know im better of course tho
low is how i wear my fitted
wit it ill kill u cuz im quik witted
missin a bitch stick my dick in it
fuck now my dick gon itch in a minute
im so untouchable
on the level of unfuckable
like im walkin around wit AIDS and a burnin dick
yall heard it bitch
yall need to learn u cant earn even if i burned ya shit
for those that think they on my level
careful cuz ill have u runnin wit the devil
barrel to ya temple
u a bitch got u cryin hittin a left note
if u got the nerve to try to serve me
hurry cuz im waitin on ya ass to serve me
then ill hurt u serve ya parents wit ya head on the plate
everyone gon see a pussy bleedin like its menstruate
yall men hate cuz u cant get ya head straight
thats how i know yall not men straight
give me ya best punchline
faggot my punch will send u to the back of the lunchline
matter of fact 5 years back to the front of my punchline
then when u dead tell pun
im done wit this one son




--- End quote ---



i put in bold stuff that didnt really make sense to me. i mean i got what u were tryna say but i dont think those were even words haha.

i underlined the parts the i liked or thought was good. overall it seemed like a good warmup rap

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had to return some how and show certain people how to do lyrical shit
good lookin out my dude

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