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Sick Love (feedback please)

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Koncept:
SICK:
rusty shank to your tank you can't rank on my level//
the rebel devil making you raise the treble//
several severed limbs in a kettle//
Jeffery Dommer protégé raised to slay//
insane in the brain, why do I act this way//
I'm not gay, but a dead body beats a live one any day//
I got naked Filipino boys locked in a cabinet//
if one tries to escape, I stab it//
if I see a severed head I gudda grab it and whack it*//

LOVE:
I keep going every day just to see her smile//
when I look into her eyes, it drives me wild//
I don't know what love is but I think this is it//
I want to hold her close and kiss those soft lips//
even to hold her hand is bliss//
her wish is my command//
cuz she's my girl and I'm her man//
she takes me to never land, she makes me understand//
god's plan for her and I//
when I'm with her, I believe I can fly//

*it being my penis

M Dogg™:
Good job dogg, I like the inside the line rhyming, great shit.

Kill:
the sick part was tight, the love part was ok

Pillow:
both were decent, way better then ur diss to mack

Reef:
Man.. the sick part is.. sick lol.. Really tight man... the love part aint as hot but still some good shit.!

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