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++A.em \/s T.i.v.a++ Newbie hotness....

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A.em:
Alright, it took some time (shi.tty PC) but here's the thread.  Rules as follows -

- Max of 20 bars, nobody wants to read a friggin essay
- No wackness.


Let me know you peeped this 'n' I'll spit 1st.


Peace

T.i.v.a:
aight homie i peeped ya so whenever ur ready spit it

'Illicit':
cool, this go be interesting.

T.i.v.a:
aight i'll spit I'M  tired of waitin for this cat

IF U DIDNT WANT TO BATTLE U COULDA SAID NO/
FUCK IT I'LL SPIT FIRST AND GO/
A.em GOT LOST, SCARED OR JUS WONT SHOW/
I JUST DONT KNOW/
 I JUST DONT GET IT/
A.em SPIT FIRST, YEAH DAWG U SAID IT/
BUT I'M TIRED OF THE WAIT/
HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE/
ITS LIKE U SPIT, MISSED AND POSTED BLANK/
YEAH I DONT SEE U  AND PROLLY NEVER WILL/
U ON A BOTTOM LEVEL NOT UP ON MY SKILL/

WHAT U CANT THINK OF NUTHIN TO POST/
OR U ALREADY DID AND ITS INVISILBE LIKE A GHOST/
IF U NEED SOME HELP SHIT I CAN BE UR COACH/
COLLAB AGAINST MY SELF BUT FUCK IT MIGHT FINALLY GET A POST!!!!


 

'Illicit':
hey, no doubt this was a nice rhyme scheme. really. but I think this is more something I'd use as a warm-up, try revoking it lol. cuz if he uses some serious punchlines you out bro. jus some advice. I wasnt knockin your shit, it was good just not for a serious battle.

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